These stories are so beautiful they make me cry

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Your humor is completely Helairious and everyone loves you for it but this too is beautiful just follow your hart

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Oh my gosh, no! It's bloody perfect, favorite one- shot ever! It just so beautiful the way that it has been written. Write another one- shot soon! But about Scorose! Haha, my fave couple!

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God , That was Abs Beautiful

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I thought it was good.

hey, after your done with the "breathless" spree can you do one for "speaking in rainbow" and "find your love"???

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i love your novels for their funnyness (seriously, keep writing them, they're addicting) but there's just something about your one-shots. they're so intense and full of emotion and they just speak to me. i normally want some humor in my readings, too much intensity usually gets boring after a while, but your one-shots are just the right length and with just enough emotion in them that they are absolutely perfect. dear prongs is my favorite so far, but they're all really good! don't give this up! ps, i've made it my mission to read all of your writings. it's taking a while, but it's so worth it!

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I really don't know why I never reviewed this before because I love it. Your writing is honestly so incredible. (:

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Um, I hate to be the rain on your parade, but you do a lot better with humor. I think Rose should have been like James in Deja Vu-Scorpius hurt her repeatedly, so why should she give him a chance?

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Your one-shots are amazing, though I also love the humor stories. Do both, please.

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it's great! magnificent! but any chance of a sequal? PLEASE!!!

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Wow! That was such an amazing story. I probably should go do my homework but I'll probably end up reading more of your stories. That story was so breathtakingly beautiful I hardly have words. The way you describe rain and Scorpius' feeling of love is perpetual. 10/10 for the first story I've read of yours.

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OMG I DIDN'T REVIEW THIS ONE? BLASPHEMY!

Utter blasphemy.

Anyway...

I DIDN'T ADD IT TO MY FAVORITES?

What's wrong with me?

Sorry. The review.

I really liked this! It was really sweet, and it showed Rose and Scorpius exactly how I'd picture them. It's perfect! I love your writing, even if it isn't humor, because the world isn't funny all of the time.

Author's Response: BLASPHEMY. YOU ARE...UH...EVICTED FROM BEING...AN awesome person...
wow, fail.

thank you so much, this has always been one story that i feel unsure about. i don't like leaving things hanging, usually. i like closure. but i felt as though if i added an ending to it, it would ruin the mysterious magical-ness of the story.
it's probably not even mysteriously magical, but i like to indulge myself sometimes (:

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Gorgeous! Don't just stick to humour :)

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Love, love, loved it. I'm so glad I came across you're story Welcome to the Chase, because then I never would've read anything by you. I wouldn't know what I was missing.

(I would be missing a great, fantastic, AMAZING writer.)

10/10

~needapenname~

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awwe :) that was honestly one of the sweetest one shots ive read in a while. its really good. scorp's too sweet :D

10/10

~Annie

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it was good...
but the spacing was really annoying... just put a single line break in between things... other wise it gets annoying for the reader :D
plot was O.k... try exploring the scene a bit more, personally I would have liked to know where they were which was unclear during some of the conversations, and remember, it's not all about what they are saying, body language, and tone say a lot about the meaning of a line... :D

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This one was very cute, and nice. I don't think I want my fav fanauthor to be type-cast as a funny author, though. I REALLY LOVED THIS. NO S**T!

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wow, that was intense, i LOVED it~~ that was AMAZING!

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I loved it! It was gorgeously written!

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I absolutely loved this! Rose/Scorpius are one of my favorite ships, and you did them justice. I love your sarcastic, stubborn Rose. I adore your uncertain, sweet Scorpius. But most of all, I am enthralled by the web you spun between them. It was beautiful.

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Aw! That was beautiful!!! I really really loved it! It was so beautifully written!
-Graceyn

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Why are you posting this so many times, but nothing else? I mean, I know true "posting" of a new chapter is only allowed one by one, but these are just edits, and don't interfere with that.

Now, review:

I liked it, but I would have liked more insight into her thoughts further in.

By the way, I think there's a song you might like, for your writing (songfic?): Fairytale, by Alexander Rybak. It won Eurovision 2009.

Author's Response: ooh, thanks for the suggestion :)
actually, this story was hidden because i should have rated it mature, so i changed the rating and it got un-hidden...which is why it was validated again.
deja vu is in the queue, if that makes you feel any better!

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This is REALLY amazing ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
its compleatly different to your comady storys but amazing all the same
it proves you can do tonnes of different types of storys and still make it brilliant
i LOVE it
thanks xx :D xx

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Aww, this is so beautiful. I'm writing a Rose/Scorpius now, but obviously because of the break my first chapter won't be on for ageees.

My username is xLauriePotter btw ;) if you ever want to check mine out in the future.

Beautiful story. and I esp loved the line "There’s just something about you that I find completely, heartbreakingly beautiful." That is so cute, and i've so kinda felt this myself.

Lovely writing. :)
9/10.

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Bah! I love this. :D It's just so cute.

Scorpius is so...god, what the word? He's too innocent, but at the same time he's so very guilty. Guilty of the lies, but innocent because he's come clean. He's owned up to his misdeeds and isn't trying to "fix" them, since they can't be fixed, but rather moving past them.

I could see your Scorpius right in front of me, flawed and perfect. Wow, I'm just a bunch of contradiction, aren't I? And I don't even know if you understand what I mean. (I sometimes wonder if I even know what I mean.)

Nevertheless, I just wanted to let you know that I loved this story. And I especially loved the lyrics at the bottom. Find Your Love by Drake is currently my favourite song. :)

Thanks so much for writing this.

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