10 Reviews Found

Review #1, by 4u4ever Petunia's Eloquence

30th May 2011:
its amazing i do hope you write more i loved it so much!

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Review #2, by lumos_ Petunia's Eloquence

21st June 2010:
Awwwh! This is really sad, but amazingly well written :) Keep it up - I want to hear more :)

Author's Response: Wow thank you! :D This really means a lot Lumos, so thanks.

I will be updating, but I've been a bit caught up :S
There is more coming though :)
Thanks for the review!


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Review #3, by Moments Reprieve I ran

17th June 2010:
Heylo Amberfire!
I enjoyed this one-shot-already-turned-short-story! It was really good - I loved all of Lily's little flashbacks about her family. They were really the kind of things that you remember when someone does die. Very sweet. Cheers!

Author's Response: Hah one-shot-turned-short-story! Nice :)
Yey! you liked it :D
I'm glad you liked the moments Lily remembered and thought they seemed realistic; I was hoping people could relate to them because almost all of them were based on real happenings.
thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! Seriously!!

Amberfire
ps. I really like 'Shadow of Midnight'! :D



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Review #4, by alexis0599 Petunia's Eloquence

14th June 2010:
i like it but the hapters are to short i mean really i am a fast reader but that is like a time passer

Author's Response: ahh, I was wondering if anyone was going to mention the dreaded word count.
I have issues with word count. It hates me.
I am trying to make the chapters longer... It will happen...

But I promise you that the next chapter... when it comes... will be over 1k words. Just for you.
Thank you for reviewing :D
Amberfire


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Review #5, by agingerrose Petunia's Eloquence

14th June 2010:
aw that's so sad, but very well written, update soon

Author's Response: Aye sad :(. *mutters to self* good thing it was trying to be sad, or else that would really, really be sad :S
;)

I'm glad you think its well written!
Never fear the updater is here! ...well soon... yeah, I'll try get the next chapter out soon...
Thank yooou for reviewing!!

Amberfire Thinks:
reviewing= awesome, therefore reviewers= very awesome, therefore agingerrose= very awesome :D
THANK YOU!
Amberfire


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Review #6, by la vita Ť bella Petunia's Eloquence

14th June 2010:
Hi!! I really like the story so far and your writing style. I especially liked this:
"I didnít care that the boy who held my hand was the one I had given antlers to earlier today, the one I screamed at constantly, the one I abhorred violently.

Right now he could have been anyone, he could almost have been Voldemort himself and I would have just kept holding on"

I hope you'll post a new chapter really soon!! :D :D :D

Author's Response: Hah, its so strange having my own writing quoted back at me; I just saw 'Voldemort' and read that part then I was like 'huuuh? I think I've written something like that...' then went back and was like 'oooh riight.' Lol I'm such a smarticle...

heh would I sound conceited if I said I liked that quote too...

Anyway, I'm so, so glad you like my story so far, and writing style :D Seriously I'm grinning madly here.

I'll try post the next chapter soonish :D
Thank you for taking the time to review!!
Amberfire


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Review #7, by NYCrocks Petunia's Eloquence

14th June 2010:
i feel like this could really become a quite mature and profound Lily/James fanfic, not as cheesy and funny-at-all-cost as some others are. And since the dark/non-sarcastic L/J ffs usually get boring rather quickly, I think you made a really smart move by making this a short-story. Keep up the good work, i really like it so far!
10/10

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much. I'm really glad you like it, I hope you still do after I'm done with it :S ...

Right now I think it will stay as a short story so I'm really delighted you think this will work well that length.

SO glad you like it!! Thank you so much for taking the time to review :D
Amberfire


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Review #8, by Riya Potter I ran

5th June 2010:
What a gud story dude! Yes, u should turn it in a short story, but this one-shot too is nice...

U hv expressed d story nicely! Hv time 2 go thru my stories?

Well, keep writing... :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you!!
I'm glad you think I've expressed the story nicely :D
And sure! If I get time I will definitely read your stories!

Heh no worries about the continuing writing right now... exams seem to have a wonderful effect on my muse ;)


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Review #9, by WhatAboutRegulus I ran

1st June 2010:
Aww how sad!! So many good times with her parents, and now they are gone. :(

Author's Response: I know :( Poor Lily.

Thank you for reviewing, it means the world, seriously - the world and reviews are like on a par of awesomeness in my mind.


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Review #10, by Valarie7505 I ran

1st June 2010:
I think it would be amazing if this was made into a short story. This one shot was really good! =D

Keep writing!! =)

Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
I've written more and I think I'll continue it... but I need to actually work out where I'm going with it and also I quite like this section as a one shot...


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