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Review #1, by xtinjsc Right Where They Belong

9th August 2011:
Your use of personification in the beginning paragraph stood out to me the most about this fic. They made the paragraph very poetic. I thought some of the words you used here were very descriptive and you presented us with clever and vivid images here, I was rather impressed.

I liked how vague the story was, I think it worked well with the tone of the story really well. You didn't go into to much detail about the why and the how, you just focused on the moment. I liked that. Overall, this was a quick and interesting read for me, so thank you!

xtinjsc (Hufflepuff)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I am super proud of this story!

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Review #2, by slytherangoddess Right Where They Belong

6th August 2011:
I think you made a short moment absolutely beautiful! This sounds as if it could be a companion piece to another story. Hmmm maybe this would be incentive to write one? lol

Your wording and description really moved the piece on nicely and I was captivated all the way through.

wonderful job!


Author's Response: Thanks! :) Maybe I will write another one! :p

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Review #3, by LovesMagic Right Where They Belong

15th August 2010:
This was a very good story :) I liked how you lead up to the point of them meeting and the little bit of dialogue was just enough to get the emotional point across.great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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Review #4, by DestinyDrake Right Where They Belong

12th August 2010:
This was really good. I would love to read more. You have a great idea started I like the tenderness of it...Great job...

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #5, by Evelyn Right Where They Belong

28th June 2010:
Awesome story! Keep up the good work! You have awesome writing ability!

Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much!

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Review #6, by Ashley Right Where They Belong

28th June 2010:
this is really, really well written. but there are a few minor errors. just read through it again paying attention to the proper form of their and there.
Other than that, it is quite a good story that I really enjoyed. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have always had problems with that! I know its such a bad habit! Thanks for pointing it out! I know better I just get kinda careless! Thanks again!

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Review #7, by Non_Ya Right Where They Belong

7th June 2010:
It was short and sweet. I liked it.

Author's Response: Thanks you so much! =)

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