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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by RoN WeAsLeY Is HoT

Chapter ONE- Reunion

26th March 2007:

interestin lol write more

make harry fall in love with hermy and see how things work out hehe

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Review #2, by Courage My Love

Chapter ONE- Reunion

20th March 2004:

Interesting...although, I wouldn't exactly classify this as a story, it's more of an update of the life and times of the former Hogwarts students...but nonetheless, this shows little or no imagination in the pairings, with the exception of Ginny and Neville...apart from that, the pairings were rather expected.

Author's Response: ohh i dont understand????? why doesn't this work????// ive tried so many times to add a new chapter but i just cant!!!!11

Author's Response: ohh i dont understand????? why doesn't this work????// ive tried so many times to add a new chapter but i just cant!!!!11

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Review #3, by SciFi129

Chapter ONE- Reunion

20th March 2004:

everything is happens way too quickly. it tells more than it shows. instead of stating who everyone is married to, show it through details and dialogue and such. it'd be much more interesting that way

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Review #4, by Gabrielle

Chapter ONE- Reunion

16th March 2004:

It's pretty good so far, so keep writing.

Author's Response: what parts do you reckon i should improve??

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