I mainly picked this one because Logan Lerman was on the banner. Turns out I made a good choice. I really like this story. It effectively tells all it needs too while still drawing you in. Good job! Now to go read that other story of yours that looked interesting!

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awesome :) i loved it

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I really loved this! I like Astoria and I enjoyed the way you portrayed her character. :)

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im reviewing this as part of the challenge you took part in.

i would like to say first of that i have placed this one shot third and will most defently look forward to reading the other chapters/oneshots of your choice.

i love the use of emotions in your story and very much enjoyed the fact that although these girls were in slytherin they are not completely heartless. i would have liked to have known a little bit more about the fling/relationship between astoria/zacharias. but i still think you covered their hurt or regretful feelings well.

i could see that the two sisters have a close bond as daphane obviously knew about the relationship and that astoria would be thinking about it. i thought this gave a very realistic feel to the story and to its characters. overall, a little bit more detail would have been nice but thought you covered the pairing brilliantly. well done.

Author's Response: Thank you wooo!!! I will PM you the stories I want you to review!

I just edited this story and added more to the story

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