Hahaha I loved the line from finny at the end I can just see Sarah and ginny as those crazy old ladies. Loved this story, especially the end chapters. Report Review
FINALLY! YES! I have been waiting for so long! Report Review
Your story was bloody brilliant you made some Realy good chapter titles in there :p I hope u make more! Report Review
This is how I'm going to tell my future husband I'm pregnant. Bloody brilliant. Report Review
awww. it was so totally adorable. I thought i was going to die when she was being so obviously jealous, I wanted to kill her, but it all worked out in the end. lovely story, fantastic! Report Review
Really great job! i loved every bit of it! I think you made a great ending too! I'm writing my first story (Breaking Ballerinas) now so i'm definately going to keep looking back at this story for inspiration. Really really great job! (this is my favorite story so far on this site :) Report Review
This was the best epilogue I've ever read. Ever. "YES! YES! YES! GRANDCHILDREN!" So. Ba-loody. Good. I cracked up while reading this entire chapter. Thank you for writing such a ridiculously amazing story. Truly, it's been such a joy to read this, and I wish it weren't over. Sigh. You are a brilliant author, and I hope you continue to write many stories! Cheers! Report Review
Oh, Char. Char, Char, bloody Char. "Who are we giving my List to if we're all paired off? That's the criteria for a perfect man!" I dunno how, but she suddenly become 20 times cooler than she already was. And Milla's banter with James is so wonderful! And James is so adorable. And I can't even write in complete sentences that don't begin with "and," that's how giddy I am from this chapter. Well fluffily done. Report Review
My favorite part of this chapter was this: “I had this done after your birthday for you. If we weren’t together by Christmas, it was going to be next year’s birthday present for you,” he explained sheepishly, looking down and fiddling with his shirt. ...so bloody sweet of him. I "awww"ed for a full minute. I adored this chapter, so full of fluff and Christmas happiness. Eh, I wish I weren't almost finished with the story, though. ): Report Review
FINALLY! This whole chapter was just glorious. Ah, finally. All is well. And I swear, Milla cracks me up with her off-kilter comments toward the end, after she and James have snogged. What a wonderful pair. Beautiful chapter. Report Review
Ugh, James just needs to go ahead and get on with it, the stupid sod! I swear! Boys. I do hope he and Milla get together soon. The suspense is killing me, but the story's so wonderful, I don't mind. I think if I had a favorite quotation, it'd be from the part: '“Congratulations, you lot,” I said warmly. They ignored me. As they should. They were, after all, busy snogging.' Hee hee. I went back and read it a couple of times and giggled each time. Great chapter! Report Review
Whoa. Talk about a loaded chapter. Just...whoa. That was incredible. Finally, is all I can say. Oh, and amazing chapter! Report Review
AAAH!!! So much excitement! Sorry for the clipped review, but I really have to go on! Eep! Report Review
Loved it! Yeah, James is a bit pigheaded, but he's also ridiculously sweet and a good best mate. And what a nice send-off for HRH! I'm glad she's out of the picture now. And Char and Ben are FINALLY together! Hallelujah! What a brilliant chapter! 50 out 10 for sure. Report Review
Eep! I love it! So warm and fluffy and happy. This chapter rocked. (All of the chapters have rocked, but this one particularly rocked my socks with the fluffiness.) Oh, sigh. Great job. You're a brilliant writer, and this story is one of my new favorites. Love, love, love. Report Review
HA! I adore Milla's mum. 'P.S. Do you fancy James, Milla? If so, I want my money from Ginny.' Seriously, such awesome mothers. I'm glad James and Milla made up; hopefully, James will realizes he fancies her soon (as, hopefully, Char will realize she likes Ben). Oh, this story is too good. I'm so glad it's already completed, because I don't have to wait with bated breath for long periods without updates. Heh! Report Review
What a complete cow! Lucia's comment was totally uncalled for. And Milla's outburst was kind of awesome. I'm so relieved she finally admitted she fancies James. And did I mention that I love Ben? He's wonderful. Excellent chapter! Report Review
Ahahaha! I knew it! Oh, this story keeps getting more and more fabulous! I love it. So good. 27 out of 10. Report Review
I'm betting 50 Galleons on them as well. Report Review
Aha! I thought Miranda fancied Nate. Eeeep! And the Ben and Char kiss! Oh, I hope they get together. That would be lovely. Poor James, though. And Milla. She's getting quite good at the whole 'stalking away' business. Another brilliant chapter! I'd write more, but I'm dying to read the next chapter, so off I go! Report Review
Can't talk. So good. Next chapter. Report Review
What a testament to Milla's self control that she isn't hexing James into oblivion right now. Ugh, James/Lucia nearly the equivalent of Won-Won/Lav-Lav. He's being such a prat, but I hope he comes to his senses soon. Did I mention I adore this story? Because I do. I just love not only how well it's written, but also the wit and frankness with which Milla speaks. And Ben and Charlotte are wonderful! I could see them getting together, if Char ever puts aside her ridiculous list. And Miranda's cynicism is so great. Another fab chapter! Report Review
Intrigue! Good for Lucia, I suppose, but I'm a bit biased, as I already love Milla. And James. And Milla and James. I really love how you write them together, as best mates, and their routines together (walking around the lake, chatting) are so real and refreshing, especially with Milla running her narrative the whole time. Seriously, this story is fantastic. Report Review
Oh, what a fabulous first chapter! I adore Milla. Already, she's fierce and snarky, and I can't wait to read more of her story. (Which is why I'm going to keep this short and read the next chapter.) Love it. Report Review
usually, i like to leave reviews practically every chapter. but your story was so good that i just blasted through all the chapters! i was seriously a woman possessed. i just HAD to find out what happened to milla and james. and you gave them the perfect ending to such a perfect love story. =D this story was absolutely amazing, and i'm glad i had the privilege of reading it. you're an amazing writer. BRILLIANT WORK! ~ally Report Review
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