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Review #1, by lanniejo

9th June 2012:

Wow, this chapter was really awesome. Good job, sorry if you felt like I was beign a negative Nelly on the last review, I always hate pointing out mistakes authors make (I feel like such a hypocrite) Anyways, I liked this chapter, look forward to seeign more from you.

Author's Response: i really appreciate people who are willing to correct my writting :) thank you! :) your reviews gave me the motivation to update more often and hope that there are people out there who are reading what i write! dont be afraid to critique anything that i write :)

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Review #2, by lanniejo

On the First Train Ride to Hogwarts

9th June 2012:

Okay, so there were some grammer mistakes, but those can easily be fixed. The first bit is alittle...I don't want to say dull, but yeah its not the most adventurous. Please do not be offended by this, I do like your story, I just wanted to offer some consructive critism. But all aside that, it's a cute story.

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Review #3, by RomioneWriter

On the First Train Ride to Hogwarts

9th June 2012:

This is a really good story! :D One thing I'd watch is tiny errors in your writing, such as repeating yourself a little and missing letters :) I suggest reading over it before you post it :) But overall I really enjoyed it! :) Good luck on your next chapter and other stories to come :)

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