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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by 0o0_Hermione_0o0 Part one: At Home

14th January 2005:
personally, I don't like it. What kind of story IS that?

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Review #2, by irazely Part one: At Home

8th July 2004:
its a very good story. You should try to continue it

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Review #3, by Lil Kit Z Part one: At Home

16th March 2004:
Okat it's a good start to your story. You should make spaces between you dialogue and paragraphs, it makes it easier to read. I don't see how this is a Hermione/Draco fic unless the grandmother is Hermione or the little girl is?Anyway keep writing and try to make the chapters a little longer. Kit

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Review #4, by Andie Part one: At Home

16th March 2004:
It was great, but why do I have the feeling that Unise falls for Draco? I thought this was a Draco/Hermione fic. Your gonna get to their romance right? Anyway, update soon, I really like it. =-)

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Review #5, by chukler Part one: At Home

15th March 2004:
ok, you might want to edit your summary..its kinda long..You want to keep the audience guessing, so hook them in..make them curious. If you put the whole story in the summary, there's no point in reading it. Also, you might want to write a bit more for your first chapter (the longer the better) and DEFINITELY put a lot space between your dialogue, and your paragraphs.

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