I lovee it! see this is why i hate lillt potter jr. and dominique weasley too but she isnt in here. anyways, I think you should make a sequel to it. So we can see what happens to scorpius.

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Helloo =]

I like how Rose tried so hard to make the night just right but you've also shown how incredibly nervous she is. I'm assuming this is Scorpius' first time over for dinner. Which, considering their family's history, is quite realistic. I am rather proud of Ron, for once not being the scarily over-protective dad and was even more surprised when he held back Hugo.

As for your ending...meh. I dunno, I didn't particularly like the idea of 'tests'. I figured she would've gone with something more than that, if you get what I'm trying to say. After all you've built up, the ending wasn't what I would have expected.

Anyway, it was still a good read :)
Lia.

Author's Response: Hello again! :)

I always try to make the characters unique in my own way, yet have them believable too and I'm glad it was.

Hm, yea. I can see what you mean. I'll see if I can't come up with something different. At the time of writing this, my brain wasn't functioning and that was the result.

Thanks for taking the time to read, definitely made my day to see a review! :)



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Its brilliant!! I wanna know what happens next :)

Author's Response: Well, I hadn't intended on it being a story, just a one-shot. But it's something to think about, eh? ;)

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Why didn't u mention what the tests were? But still, the story was quite nice... I lyked it. Good dude!!!

Keep writing... :)

Author's Response: I have another review that asks that. Maybe I should make it a short story, eh? :)

Thanks for the review!


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A sequel is necessary. I wanna read about those tests.
Good job, love.
Much love

Author's Response: A sequel, really? I'll take it into consideration. ;)

Thanks for reading!

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i dont know why you didnt like the ending. i loved it!!! this was really good, like seriously. i love rose and scorpius! 11/10 XD

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! It never seems to work out for me, the way I want it. No matter what I try. And Rose/Scorpius are my favorite Next Generation couple. (:

Thanks so much for reading!


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