No James won't be okay with it and WILL hate Sirius. One of the first rules of being a guy is that you NEVER get involved with a girl your mate fancies, never.

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Hi I have been reading this story ever since you started it but I never left a review. I just wanted to say that this is one of my favorites because I never really read lily/sirius and I think youre a brilliant writer :) also I was wondering if yOu could maybe update faster? I hate waiting for so long because I can't wait to read it! Nice job!

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tres tres bien! bon chance!

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No Remus is wrong, it is betrayal and Sirius isn't a very good friend.

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Its interesting that Sirius is a big enough A-hole to steal James's cloak to take Lily into Hogsmeade but somehow still thinks he's his friend.

Author's Response: I didn't mean for it to come across as Sirius was stealing James' cloak, I pictured them always sharing it among the four of them-- almost like common property between them. Like the Marauder's map.

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I was just reading some of your other stories, and i was wondering, are you ever going to continue Innovation? It seemed really interesting

Author's Response: You know, I always go back to it which is why I have not deleted it off my page as of yet, you know? Right now this story and another I'm working on for a challenge are my priority, but I haven't completely given up on Innovation. I might go back and revisit it in the near future :) Thanks for the interest!!

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I just found your story and started reading it non stop. Usually I am a die hard James/Lily fan, but i think this is really interesting because in the prologue, theyve ended up together and this sirius/lily relationship is different from anything else ive read, so im really intrigued. Cant wait for the next update :D

Author's Response: Huzzah!! One convert down! Yes, the story will end up being Canon just has quite an alternative path to reach it :) I'm glad you like it!! I'm working on the next chapter now, so it'll be ready right for the queue re-opening. Thank you for the review!

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Normally I only really canon, normal ship stuff. But this is pretty good - I think one reason I like it is that Sirius tries to protect James, so it can theoretically (does) still end up canon. I don't know, haha. But good story, keep updating!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot. Yes the canon does happen, just in a very very different way :)

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This story could use a good proof reader, but aside from that, I love everything about it. The nature of the story presents a situation so many people can relate to, it just makes the story come to life. Good show, you.

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Love it, one of the best fanfics I've read so far. Can't wait for more! :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I hope you keep reading!

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Oh my gosh. This story is simply addicting. I am a sucker for Sirius/Lily and I love the way that you write them! I like that you have Sirius trying so hard to fight his feelings and remain loyal to James. Though I love Sirius/Lily I feel that often they are written so that Sirius wants to betray James or has no problem doing it. Keep up the AMAZING work!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it so much! I love writing it :) I love Lily/ James, so I have to believe if this ship was EVER to happen, it would not be without Sirius internal struggle to Sirius. Thanks for the read and review!

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Excellent Story!!! I like that Sirius seems more down to earth in this story. Very relatable! Also, wonderful job with Lily's parents. They just seem perfect. I have to say, I am a huge James/Lily fan so this is kind of a hard story to read. Keep up the good work and update soon!!!

Author's Response: Oh I am SUCH a James/ Lily fan, but this is a guilty pleasure. I'm so glad you're taking a chance on this story :) Thanks for the review!

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I really like this story! I've always had a soft spot for Sirius and Lily. Today i just sad "what the heck" and read a bunch of their fanfics. I LOVE them now. It's one of those pairings that is like a guilty pleasure. 'Cause you know it's completely impossible for them to get together. So PLEASE update soon!!

Author's Response: This ship is SUCH a guilty pleasure. I've had this story bopping around in my brain for months and I'm finally writing it out :) Thank you for reading and taking the time to write a review.

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I'm already in love with it :D

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This story is awesome! This chapter was great too; the portrayals were bang on, the dialogue flowed, and the pace was good. I especially loved the part at the beginning-ish when Lily was complaining to her mum about James. I only know a few people who can talk to their mothers like that, and it seemed right that Lily should. Also, your portrayal of Lily is one of the best I've ever read.

Author's Response: Wow wow wow, thank you so much :) That's a lot of really great compliments that (although I'm not quite sure I deserve) I appreciate a lot. I envy my Lily's relationship with her mother haha. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

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Please please finish!! So good so far!

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I like this story a lot, and I especially like that it's in first person. The voice is really genuine and unique. Did I mention that already? Anyway, good songs too. Great job!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you like the voice and the perception of Sirius. Hahah, I'm glad someone likes my suggested jams! Thank you for the review!

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Goodness, this is pretty out of my element but i like it! :D update soon will you? :) *nudge, nudge* ;)

Author's Response: I will! Most of the next chapter is written already *pats self on back*.

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To be honest, this is the first story i've read with sirius/lily ship. Let's just put it this way: if it's one ship i adore in j.k rowlings (aah, bless her) world, it's james/lily :) although i think you're a really good writer so i'll continue reading even though it hurts in that part of my heart where i hold james/lily oh so dear :p. Soo, i'll continue to the next chappie, great beginning so far :)

Author's Response: Trust me, I absolutely LOVE James/ Lily, this story has just been literally straining against the cardboard storage box I put it in in my brain, so I have no choice but to write it. It's a challenge and I like it, I see you as the perfect critic! If I can get you to like Sirius/ Lily, I will consider this story a success.

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This is brilliant! And very original. I really like the voice too, nice job!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Sirius' voice, I'm trying to make it a bit different than all the other Siriuses I've read out there. I'm trying to add a new dimension of relatable-ness to him. I'm glad you think I'm on my way to accomplishing that goal :) Thanks for the review!

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haha i loved it!! nice job, can't wait to see what's next! update soon!!

Author's Response: I'm trying to update as much as I can! Thanks for the review!

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Yes. Oh, yes. This is good. Keep it up!!!
I love Sirius and Lily, almost as much as James and Lily. Good job

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far :) I've always wanted to write this ship and now I'm giving myself the chance to :) Thank you so much for your review!

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