I absolutely love your story! So funny!

I also really hope that Lupin and Elsa get together!

Great job! : )

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I'm so in love with this story :3 continue it and update A.S.A.P.
Thanks for being awesome :)

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Oh her dad is horrible. Update soon 9/10 : )

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HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE?!! she has almost killed her brother!! UPDATE!! please!! 9/10 =]

Author's Response: hopefully I will be able to update soon. I have to do some major editing. thanks for reviewing!

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haha i like that. charity is great. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: I have to admit, Charity is quickly becoming one of my favorite characters to write. haha. Thanks for reviewing!

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the spacing was a bit weird between lines in this chapter but otherwise it is good. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: yeah, sorry about that. I don't know why it did that. :/ thanks for reviewing, though!

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oh poor elsa. my favourite line was
"Panic? Me? No.
This is my not panicking face.
Oh my god, we’re going to die."
hey is the woman in the chapter images the singer adele??
9/10 =]

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damn they broke up. i was really hoping that they would make it work. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: maybe they can. have to wait to see! ;) thanks for reviewing!

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elsa really needs to love remus. i liked how they made up. it was sweet. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: sometimes I think she does too. Remus is quite a sweetie. :) thanks for reviewing!

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im speechless. a lot just happened. so remus told elsa that he was awerewolf because he assumed that was what james told elsa. have i got that right? 9/10 =]

Author's Response: yep. just a big misunderstanding. thanks for reviewing!

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that was really sad. especially the lines "But the sinking feeling in my stomach told me that it wouldn’t be the last shared between human and dirt.

The war was coming.

And no one was ready."

poor alice. i really wish that elsa would stop liking sirius and start to really fall for remus. that would be nice. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: honestly, I sometimes wish that when I write this. I'm still undecided. :P thanks for reviewing!

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this was nice. i loved that devon was at the party. 9.5/10 =]

Author's Response: thanks! :) I thought I'd better throw him back into the story.

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i liked the costumes!! 9/10 =]

Author's Response: thanks, I had a really hard time coming up with some generic ones that wouldn't be 'real' to them. :) thanks for reviewing!

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i like this story. it is great. 9/10 =]

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oh well that changed things up a bit. poor devon though. 9/10 =]

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haha well marlene took that well. 9/10 =]

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oh this plan can't go down well. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: probably not, right? :) thanks for reviewing!

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oh that was harsh of regulus. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: yes, yes it was. thanks for reviewing!

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oh wow she has 'nice' friends. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: she sure does ;) thanks for reviewing!

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this was a great first chapter. i loved it. 9/10 =]

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omg what happend i kind of like the little kid though and i hope the babys not sirius's

Author's Response: well, I guess you'll just have to wait and see! hopefully I'll be able to update soon. thanks for reviewing! :)

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This chapter was the perfect balance of fluff and angst, so bravo.

I think Elsa's and Remus's date was really cute, adnon the other hand, I think the werewolf incident seemed prefect for the story... Now Elsa can connect to Remus even more, and we all needed a reminder that despite the light conditions at Hogwarts, there was a war brewing as well. :)

I also noticed that you misspelled "Fenrir" in the story. (Sorry for all my attention to minor detail, but I have an extreme case of (un-diagnosed) OCD. xD )

Cheers!

~Khanh

Author's Response: Thanks so much! My bad on the Fenrir thing. I can't spell his name right ever... :P Thanks for reviewing all these chapters, I appreciate it!

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Another lovely chapter. The prank was amusing, and I like the bit of foreshadowing in there, too (The part where Alice was laughing "like a madman"… or should I say, woman).

I noticed that sometimes you put "it's" instead of "its"... If it is a contractions of "It is", it should be the former, while a possesive like you used should be the latter. :)

You have really got me curious in finding out what will happen next! ^^

~Khanh

Author's Response: Ah, thanks for catching that. I don't have a beta, so sometimes I slip up on those little things. Thanks for reviewing again!

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Oh, things are about to get exciting!

I love how Elsa is always so brutally honest about something, especially herself. Sometimes it seems like she's just putting herself down, but I appreciate the fact that she has come to acknowledge and accept her flaws, and attempt to change them. I think that's part of what makes her unique.

The last few lines have really sparked my interest in the events to come! ^^

~Khanh

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm pretty much going to agree with everything you say here. :)

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Interesting chapter so far, a good continuation of the last. The Regulus bit was quite unexpected... Hmm... Elsa is in a pretty complicated relationship wiht the Black brothers... I wonder how everyone else would react?

Speaking of reactions, I think the incident with Alice wasn't that major, so why did it snowball into all of Gryffindor hating her? That part doesn't make much sense to me...

Oh, and I also caught a few mistakes, such as:

The 'Marauders' as they called themselves, and I, had only a small history.

^ The commas are placed wrong... you should actually add one after "Marauders" and remove the one after "I".

I'm interested in what will happen next! ^^

~Khanh

Author's Response: You know, since I started writing this two years ago, I really have to agree about the Alice thing. It's not realistic, but all I can justify it with is that maybe it's just Elsa's perception of what everyone else is thinking? I don't know. Thanks for the input!

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