I liked this chapter, it was very well written and funny. I really enjoyed the part about the Malfoys! I can't wait to find out who just walked in, I have a feeling it's Teddy? No? Oh well, please update soon :)

Author's Response: :D Thank you for the kind review, and you'll have to wait and see who it is :P This will get updated soon! Thanks again.

-Sarah

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DOCTOR WHO!

Glad to know you like Matt Smith and Karen Gillan. :)

Author's Response: LOL, yes I quite like Doctor Who :P Thank you for the review anyways!

-Sarah

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great story! very intruiging start, and your idea sounds so original. I love the way you had dom and louis react to one anouther. It seemed so natural. You've got great quality in your writing and it all seems very believable. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Getting this to see natural was my biggest issue! I've always been fairly bad at dialogue and getting a review like this is so inspiring. And the fact that you called this original is just icing on the cake! Thank you for such a great review, I appreciate it a lot ^__^

-Sarah

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This is really well written. What I want to know is why is whats wrong with working at WWN?

Author's Response: Whats wrong is that her parents had set such high standards and the WWN falls quite short of that ^_^ It'll get clearer in later chapters! Thank you for the review :D

-Sarah

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