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Review #1, by maskedmuggle The talk between cat and girl
27th May 2010:
Hey!

First off, thanks for entering my challenge! I really admire you for writing about Crookshanks, since nobody seemed keen to do it.

I really like your story/plot idea. I think it's very original, and very sad too. I don't think you managed to characterise Hermione exactly, but you did a pretty good job of it.

Some of your spelling/grammar is a bit weird, and not quite right, although the story still flows well. Perhaps a beta might be a good idea?

I think this is an interesting short story, and a second chapter might be a good idea if you were interested in continuing the story, because it would make a great story from now to Crookshank's reunion with Hermione! :)

Thanks, and good work,
Charlotte :)

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