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Review #1, by WhatAboutRegulus Flash backs and a not so sweet sixteen.

3rd June 2010:
Good story, a little confusing at some parts but aren't they all in the beginning. You have some typo's but it was a good first chapter.

WhatAboutRegulus

Author's Response: thanks! i saw the typo's today when i re read it haha ill fix 'em. dont worry it wont be so confusing after i put more on haha! and thanks for actually reading my first chapter!!

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