I can't say I loved this one-shot - but that is probably cause this kinda story isn't really my thing. BUT it was good. It showed clearly love, obsession, hurt, and betrayl - and it was very well written. It all went quite fast, however - I would have loved to have read a little more about his obsssion with her at school; but I suppose that wasn't the point. Awesome one-shot (: 7/10Author's Response: thank you for reviewing this even though you didnt like it. i was really wanting feed back on this particular one shot. it was in response to a challenge and i wasn't to fond of it myself. i just wanted another persons opinion on it too. thank you. =] Report Review
This is really scary... but I like it. It's so well written and really different to other ones I have read. =] 10/10Author's Response: aw yay thank you. it was for a challenge. so im sorry if it scared you to much Report Review
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