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Review #1, by Adrielne How To Run -

19th August 2010:

First off, sorry for only getting around to reading your challenge entry now, but lots was going on and I completely forgot about the deadline I had set for myself!
Hoping that you would forgive me, I shall move on :-)

When I thought of this title, I thought how wonderful it would be to read a powerful fic, about someone who is at a turning point in their lives. They can run away and hide or run towards the unknown. The story would be very emotional and strong. You captured those emotions.

What bothered me a bit was the events you chose. First, you show us Hermione right after Voldemort tells Hogwarts that Harry is dead. Then you have her on a train or at a station. If she was coming home from Hogwarts after the war, there would be no more Tom Riddle to worry about. If it was before the battle, I think it would make more sense to put that scene as the first.

I'm not a Ron/Hermione fan, but your story was quite a good read.

I will post the winners of this challenge on my HPFF blog today or tomorrow.



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