Being a big Harry Potter fan, i like this, but please don't deviate much from the real storyline...its good, a few grammar mistakes, please write some more chapters.

Author's Response: im gonna try not to deviate from cannon, but what i love about fan fiction is that there is the option to deviate from the plot line, especially with the marauders era. i have a few more chapters in the works, so stay tuned :) thanks for the review :)

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It was a good story although it jumped around the place which was a little confusing at times. Other than that i loved it! Keep writing!!! :)

Author's Response: Why thank you! i know its a little jumpy but i am quite happy with it, even if it is a little confusing! thank you so much for the review! :)

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Love this story ... :)

JilyRonks ;) x

Author's Response: why thank you :)

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ummm... i really dont get it. it is sorta hard to understand

Author's Response: sorry if its hard to understand, i think i did kind of word this chapter funny, thank you for the review! :)

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what is with your page?! its like all stretched and its kind of annoying... but awesome story!!

Author's Response: i guess its because of my super long chapter name, i will working on shortening it, thank you so much for the review! :)

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So far,I'm liking the story!Keep up the good work :D

Author's Response: HANNAH!! you gorgeous girlie! thank you so much thank you thank you thank you! : D

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Methinks this is going to be one of my new favorite stories!!!:D

Author's Response: Hannah!!! gorgeous girlie
i know right a lillyxjames fic with a little slash! haha! that made my day!! oh slask XD haha! : ilu

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