5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Lieke the fight

21st June 2005:
And all I say is where are the other chapters? Bit confusing too without the capital letters and points. But for the rest I liked it. But since it was written in 2004 I don't think I will ever see the other chapters, or will I? Please prove me wrong!

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Review #2, by lonefighter the fight

4th April 2004:
ummm...ok, the plot's great, but the mechanics are not so great. I really do like the story, though, and it'll be interesting to see where it goes. Update soon!

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Review #3, by Black Widow the fight

20th March 2004:
okay what's up with you? You have no puntuation, no capitalisation, and no spell-check. otherwise its an okay story. I liked how Dudley helped Harry, but the whole buff Harry thing is kinda used.

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Review #4, by Bellatrix the fight

16th March 2004:
The plot is good. But you need to seriously actually TRY to spell stuff right. You also need to proofread for small mistakes. Another tip, make your paragraphs shorter, people will be more compelled to read it. You need some serious work done on this.

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Review #5, by nixie dark the fight

16th March 2004:
PLEASEEEE PLEASSSSSSEEEEE! write more, that waz great, writeor ill sue MUWHAHAHAHAHA

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