so um i loved it to say the least keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you so much! ;) Report Review
This is what I like:
- The OC isn't "perfect"
I think it's interesting for you to list her with those physical characteristics, I can actually relate to your character XD I have those mud eyes and knotty hair, but anyway...
I think you've established Becca really well. She has a unique personality already. I sense that by being tutored by Remus, she'll get closer to the marauders, but that's just me. I hope that, if this does happen, she doesn't leave Cal 'cause I think he's got potential to be a really great OC.
You seem to have a started a great story, I wish you luck with the rest of it.Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I was a little unsure of this when I posted it, but I'm glad you liked it! ;) Report Review
Yess! This is finally up! It's really good! I love Rebecca. She seems real and not some ridiculous Mary Sue. Callum might be right about the Marauders. I can't wait to find out! This is really good! Keep it up.
P.S 10/10Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the review! :) I'm glad you like the character of Rebecca! I'll update soon! Report Review
I like this. I normally don't like 'adding' a fifth person into the marauder scheme, but your not doing that, your making a date for...Remus, I think. Anyway, keep up the good work(:
~LilyFireAuthor's Response: Hey, thanks for giving me the first review for this story! Glad you liked it! :D Report Review
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