Ha! Love it! Revenge stories are the best. Report Review
update soon update soon Report Review
Rose still seems kinda clueless in like friends since shes never had many but i think its cute Report Review
WOW! Sirius has sooo got it coming! Luv it. Update soon! Report Review
This is a good story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes! Update soon! =] Report Review
HA. HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHA! I love it.
Love, love, love it. That's exactly what she needed to do. I wouldn't thrown in a couple of other things too. But I think that she handled that nicely :))
Update soon? Pretty pleaseAuthor's Response: I am glad you like it! :)
Thank you for the review and the next chapter shall be up anytime now! Report Review
MY GOD. i love it. its wonderful! carry on Report Review
ahaha i love it, update soon
FAVOURITE!!Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter should be up anytime now! Report Review
LMAO. The ending made me laugh :')
Aawwh. She sounds beautiful. Grrr.
Update soon! :)xAuthor's Response: Hahaha
There has to be some type of justice! haha :)
I shall! Report Review
I loved it, keep going!Author's Response: I shall! :) Report Review
Haha! I love it. She showed them. They were practically drooling at her feet. And the best part is that they can't have her because of what they did to her. They totally deserve it. I can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)Author's Response: I love revenge stories oh, oh so much. :)
Thank you! I'll be updating anytime the next chapter gets validated! Report Review
Awwwh. Poor Rose!
This is great so far :D Update soon!Author's Response: Thank youuu! :) Report Review
I LOVE THE PLOT
Good comeback stories are always delicious
One thing that really bothers me is that you said and I quote
'lost in a sea of little white girls who have no butt or boobs, of course I'm considered obese'
Well, Hun, I am a little, caucasion female, I have a small chest and butt. I found this really offensive. I have curvaceous, hispanic friends, and I have absolutely no problem with them.
It really upsets me, because it seems like your putting me in bad lightAuthor's Response: First off, I'm glad you like the plot! haha :D
Second: oh man! I'm really sorry, I didn't mean for it to come off as offensive! Eeek!
I'll reword that part once the next chapter is live. Again, I'm sorry you were insulted, I only put it that way for a snarky comment on her part. I didn't mean it to be an attack on all skinny girls haha Report Review
oh yay kick butt gal take that Report Review
Hi Emily! Kudos for getting over writers' block!
So first... it's kind of a short chapter. Especially for a novel. Maybe you can work on making the next ones longer?
Well you didn't establish much in this chapter. But it is definitely intriguing and I can't wait to read more of it.
But poor Rose. That sucks. And I kind of like stories that show the mauraurders (sp? haha) in bad light... because not going to lie... they seem like jerks.
So. I'll be looking for the next chapter!Author's Response: I know it was extremely short, however I want the story to go longer than 20 chapters, but the chapters aren't going to go over 2000 words, so I'm not completely sure which would be best, honestly.
The first chapter wasn't meant to establish much, just to kind of give a taste. Much more will be explained in chapter 2, I promise. :D
Thank you very much for the review! Report Review
hell yeah beat there ass go galAuthor's Response: Oh, trust me, she will. Seriously. haha Report Review
OoOo I love a good comeback story! They make me smile! :D I really like it so far, and I can't wait For the next chapter! Great job with this chapter; I hope writers block won't attack this story! Till next time.
Very excited for chapter numero dos,
P.S. Go Rose! You tell those asshole marauders! Sorry I had to say that cuz even though I LOVE the marauders they were pretty horrible in this chapter!Author's Response: So do I, it instills the badassness in me! Hahaha :D
I will try extremely hard to keep my writers block at bay, and the next chapter should be up after it's validated. Report Review
Ooh I love it! I hope you continue it :)Author's Response: Thank you very muchh! :D Report Review
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