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Review #1, by FredWeasleyIsMyKing Hate?

19th March 2015:
Hi there

I'm here for Gryffindor in the review competition.

Okay, this was really lovely. I love the detail you went into in Lily's thought process and how she tried to convince herself he was still a toerag she should hate but in the end couldn't because it simply wasn't true anymore. We didn't get to see much of James but I like what we heard about him. The way he's matured, stopped randomly cursing and calmed down on the pranking. He sounded like he was doing a great job of being headboy :)

The one teensy mistake I noticed is that you changed James eye colour at the end. You started with hazel which is canon then changed to green... I'm guessing you just got mixed up with Lily which is understandable! Nothing bad, just thought I'd point it out :)

Anyway, this was really lovely and I enjoyed reading it. It's nice to finish on such a hopeful note and it's let me think that this is the part where they'll get together!! *fingers crossed*

Great job!

Lauren

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Review #2, by evanlyn Hate?

5th June 2010:
I like this - sweet and to the point. Very good.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by chivated Hate?

25th May 2010:
Pretty good story. You might want to try writing longer stories, I think they might work better for you.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I do write longer stories I just don't usually post my stories online. This was more of a writing exercise than anything, I didn't even have a plan for a story. I was just bored and had a paper in front of me so I grabbed a pen and started writing to see what would come out. I liked so I posted it. I didn't even really edit it before hand. But when I do write, which is becoming more infrequent, it's usually with much more thought and for a much longer plot in mind. Thanks again for the review.

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