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Review #1, by elegantphoenix Great Hangletonís Ballroom

11th May 2010:
Hi, boysof_p0tterfan509 from the forums here with your review! Sorry it took so long, life's been busy!

Thanks for taking on my challenge! As I'm feeling a bit lazy, I'll guess that your object was a doll. Well, I think you did quite a good job with it. I liked the fact that Merope was there with Tom, sort of guiding him and revealing the things he had been oblivious to in life. I was a bit surprised that he hadn't been upset about the fact that Merope had used a love potion on him to make him love her, but I still liked the one-shot. Something tells me that there's more to this, but whether there is or not, well done :)

Overall, the only things I spotted were a few spelling mistakes here and there, but that's it. Thanks again for giving the challenge a go!

9/10
Best,
Nadhira

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Review #2, by silver ink Great Hangletonís Ballroom

29th April 2010:
Wow...This is really quite good! I did the challenge as well, and I think you incorporated the object extremely well... Much better than how I did it :/ Haha. I loved the whole think with the dolls!

Excellent.
-silver ink

Author's Response: oh thankyou :D
I must take a look at your story, I'm intrigued how other people took to this idea >.<


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