It was good, but there were a ton of spelling and grammar mistakes. I want to be an English major, what can I say? I did like it though. You just need a Beta.Author's Response: We Are Padfoot and Prongs,
Oh, god, I KNOW. I cringe upon reading this thing. It's horrible. Don't judge my youngness! Report Review
I liked it. I love the song, and since I'm normally not a fan of next-gen it was surprising that I liked it so much. I really liked Albus, and everyone was super!
LizzieAuthor's Response: lizmusic45,
You picked this to review? Gosh, thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it, even though it was next-gen. And yeah, Albus is a sweetie. Report Review
It was really good. It was kinda cute in a way. And well I kinda admire you for writing it by hand. Cause I've tried doing that. I didn't really get this far. I didn't find any mistakes between Al and Ali but I did notice you wrote Ally a few times. Not sure if it was intentional though :)Author's Response: hplover_15,
Awww, thanks, hun! I'm glad you liked(: And Ali is Alice's nickname, while Ally is Rose's nickname for Al. Sorry for the confusion. xD Report Review
UTTERLY AWESOME AND THAT IS MY REAL NAME WOW I LOVE THIS STORY! So romantic yet so touching and using the Taylor Swift power in it...Author's Response: Tiffany,
You confuse me. But I'm going with a simple thank you(: Report Review
Whoa, I love it :) Fifteen is an amazing song and I listened to it while reading this. It was an awesome effect. :D 10/10 and favourited, it's beautiful and a really cool idea. I love the five points you clarified at the end :L love it full stop! :)Author's Response: lunarocks14,
Aww, deary, you are like, awesome. I'm so glad you liked it! :D Report Review
I thought it was a good way to go about writers freedom if you wanted to write the story more based on the song than the books :)
there were a few spelling mistakes but not too major, my only objection is mainly with grammer, and that was fine as far as I can tell.
Good job, I might make it into a song fic though so people don't think it's just a one shot. unless you did, and I just didn't notice, lolAuthor's Response: gremlin,
Well, I'm glad that you agree with my freedom of writting. :D And yeah, I know, I'm not a fan of spelling. I suck at it. Terribly. :)
Oh, I didn't realize it wasnt...? Well, I'll fix it if you're right. :) Report Review
I love this story!! i could even see it being turned it to like a movie, i loved the idea!Author's Response: preppy arteaga,
I'm thrilled that you liked it! :D Report Review
Good Story! I liked it!Author's Response: ReAnna,
Thank you! So glad. :) Report Review
Ok your way wrong about her and Taylor Lautner. That song was about two years before they even started dating. Anyywayya, the story was really goodAuthor's Response: No, I know, what I meant about them was the story itself was written when they were dating. :D But, thanks for the compliment! Report Review
hey this was awesome :)Author's Response: agingerrose,
Thank you! Glad you liked it. :D
Okay, I have to say that I really enjoyed reading this and it was a very good reflection of the song itself too!
This was absolutely amazing and I can't see why anyone wouldn't like it. I think it was a good change to make Scorpius older to fit the part because I don't think it would have worked so well if he was Rose's age.
It was definitely a great portrayal of the song in story form - I think it was with the carpal tunnel though, don't you? (:
Keep writing, you're brill (L)
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OMG! (that, my friend, right there, is a sign that I am turning girly. I am not a girly girl. you ruined me) This is probably one of the best reviews I have gotten. I am so glad you thought it was a good reflection of the song, it involved a lot of scribbling out in the writting. :)
And the fact that you thought it was amazing, wow, that made my day. I am so glad you agreed with making him older, my thought lines were exactly the same. It wouldn't make sense, in my opinion, if he was the same age, because then it wouldn't fit the 'senior boy' part, or, again, my opinion, I think it'd be weird if he came back the next year as well, and they just acted as if nothing happened. ;)
I do, now, certaintly not while I was writing it, think that it was worth the carpal tunnel. I do love writting by hand, but it HURTS. :)
Thank you so, so, so much for this review. I am now grinning like a moron. You have reduced me to this. :) Report Review
Is there a sequel? I really liked it, despite a few minor grammar/spelling mistakes.
Sequel? Please? :)
Author's Response: I'll have to think about it. I'd really like to write a sequel, it seems like it'd be fun to, but I don't know. If I get inspired, and if I ever get around to finishing off my other stories, then maybe. :) So glad you liked it! Report Review
I was going to review earlier but life got in the was and I was only able to finish this song-fic today! Anyway great chapter! I honestly love Taylor Swift, in fact I was listening to it while I read your story! Great chapter title!
It was very funny, as usual!
Loved it!Author's Response: Florifera,
Yay! Another review from you! So glad you liked it, I had fun writing it, as I said. I recently (yesterday) went back and reread it, and decided that I like it again, so that's that. :) Report Review
Wow. Just-wow. Good song. Great story.Author's Response: Ginny Yeske,
Thank you so much! This is one of the nicest reviews I have ever gotten! :) Report Review
I'm a freshman in high school and whenever I hear about the girls in my grade, who are, for the most part, older than me (the place where I used to live had a later cutoff date for the entering kindergarteners, so they're mostly 15 and I'm 14), and their relationship problems, I roll my eyes. It's not that I don't feel sorry for them, it's just that I don't think it make sense. They're not going to get married for five years at the least, and I just think this story sort of exemplifies the problems with high school relationships, especially if one of the people in it is older than the other.Author's Response: phoenixy_friend,
Yep. I'm not in HS yet. So I don't know. But even in my grade, there are a lot of relationship problems. I do appreciate your anaylsis of this story, but I don't know if it's like, a compliment, or an insult, or just a comment. :/ :) Report Review
I liked the story, I really did. And I thought it was interesting how you mentioned the regret it Scorpius' eyes as she walked away. It made me think that maybe, just maybe, he did actually care for her. And Albus seemed to care for Ali. Then again, that may just be my imagination working overtime. If I'm right though, I could see a sequel coming from this. In my mind's eye that sees this sequel, Lucas wouldn't be there, it'd be Al and Ali, and it would focus more on Rose and Scorpius. I can see it though. It could even be turned into a full story. It would also be interesting if Lucas and Scorpius heard the song and realized that they had been tricked into acting it out.Author's Response: Gryffy_Girl917,
Wow, you really put a lot of thought in this. :) I did write it like that so IF I ever start a sequel, I'll have something to work on. I'm actully looking for inspiration for one, but I don't know yet. I may just use some of your ideas! Thx for the review! :D Report Review
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