Amazing story, cant wait to find out what happens next :)Author's Response: thanks, Im taking a break at the moment, to gather my thoughts and get inspired once again, Report Review
Well a good chapter overall. I love this pairing and i love your writing so its a good combination.
Love MeerkatAuthor's Response: thank you. and thank you again. Its nice to get such flattering reviews. Report Review
Poor Hermione and Draco.
Love MeerkatAuthor's Response: Well I'm sure they will make it out ok. thanks for the review. Report Review
Another great chapter. I love Hermione and Draco and I have fallen in love with Cassi, but lets face it, its hard not to!
Love MeerkatAuthor's Response: She is a little angel after all. Thank you for the review, I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Report Review
I am so excited to be reading the sequel. I absolutely loved Soho Evenings so I have been waiting to find some time to sit down and read this sequel properly. Once again thank you.
Love Meerkat.Author's Response: thats fine i hope you enjoy the story and continue to do so. Report Review
I Love it! This is a Great plotline. Sorry I didn't review earlier, I was just so caught up reading. It is written very well.Author's Response: Im glad that you loved it and i will be posting more regularly so keep your eyes open Report Review
I love Hermione's side comments and thoughts in this story. They are so funny... Lol : ) When is the next chapter coming? Soon I hope... KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!Author's Response: thanks, im considering posting one soon. maybe tomorrow. i'm glad that you like her side comments, i find them funny too, Report Review
LOVED IT! the scheme colours choice, I can imagine it. the venue I can picture it in my head just perfect!
and I really felt as I was the one entering the manor with him.omg!
loved it! thanksAuthor's Response: oh really, you flatter me too much. it too far to long to write and even longer to put the detail in.
I am glad that you loved it. Report Review
It was never my intention to offend you! I am sorry...completely opposite I just wanted to say how great you are and how I love this story...and that I was really looking forward to read more...
I know I read stories that are update every 3 months or more! it sucks!
I completely understand, I know you have a life, I know that its not easy to write a good story but are so good what you've written is much more than satisfactory...it only proves to me that whatever comes to your mind will be awesome!!
I only wish that you dont abandon this story =(
sorry for the misunderstood in my words before...you are really great!
and I love this story, Looking forward for more
and thats exactly what I meant before...Author's Response: thanks, i think it was having a bad day.
I updated this just for you...to keep you going for a while.
I will try and split chapters between my other story (My Boyfriend: James Potter) and this one so that there are more regular updates.
Thanks for the review and Im glad that you love the story. Report Review
well I am quite disappointed I love this story it is quite unique, its different from the ones I am used to read and I really like it!!! and as I can see, so does a lot of people, but it seems that you dont care much about the people who read..I hate it when a lot of fanfic authors stop writing or take too long to update it, coz we come here to check it everyday!! hoping to read a story that we like..and you say that the next time may be, next month next week, who knows? dont start writing a good story like this if you can keep writing and finish it..
we are really waiting for the next chapters!!! think about us...you are good, dont put this story aside!!Author's Response: I am trying. But being tied down with a whole other series and also that i am in a rut on where to go in the story line.
I am sorry but do not have a go at me just because I don't up date regularly. I have been reading stories which haven't been updated in six months.
How can you say that I don't care, I reply to every single review and it is not my fault that I can't think of what to write next and also what I have written is far from satisfactory.
I would be criticized for posting a substandard chapter but also if I don't post at all. I would rather post something which is to my standard than rubbish.
I am sorry that you are disappointed but there is little i can do...if i have a spark of an idea i am sure that i will post. Report Review
AMAZING, absolutely amazingAuthor's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it so much Report Review
i'm really enjoying the story so far can't wait until the next chapter :)Author's Response: make sure that you come back and read chapter 5 due to the fact that it is missing as it is a new addition and is in validation, it makes the story flow better.
But I am glad that you liked this story. Report Review
when will the next chapter be up?Author's Response: possibly soon, I'm not sure due to the fact that I am editing the Prequel and posting a new story...I could be next week, or next month...sorry.
Thanks for your review Report Review
i really like the story so far(: cant wait for the next chapter!!Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it :D Report Review
Awesome! Can't wait to read Hermione and Dracos' wedding. :)Author's Response: I haven't even considered that yet, augh!!! oh well. thanks for your review Report Review
love the ending very funny.well,cant wait till the next one.
p.s. u wint see a review for me till you end the story,that all i can promsie.Author's Response: Okay, will get onto the next chapter for you :D Report Review
Cute story, cant wait for your updates. :) A little bit check on the spelling though. :)Author's Response: okay, thanks...i know its my big problem Report Review
omg i love this story :) whens the next chapter??Author's Response: when the que opens up again. thanks so much for reviewing. Report Review
i didnt like this sorry, it was lackluster and short. Not my kind, it didnt explain anything, how they got together.Author's Response: 1) i havent even fiinished it yet, it isnt under completed on the web site
2) as it is a squil i asume that you have read the first story (the is all about them getting togehter)
if you do wish ot read the 1st story it is called Soho Evenings Report Review
Hey, I know I promised I would review your story ages ago and I'm so sorry it took me so long! It's lizzacc from the forums, in case you were wondering. ^_^
First Impression: I was put off by a misspelling in your story summary. It's supposed to be "sequel". The first paragraph is very interesting but not much is revealed. I know this is a sequel but for readers who don't know what happened, there should be more of an explanation.
Characterization: This is a very strong point. Hermione seemed much like the one we know but it's obvious she changed from age and experience. You stayed true to her original character but also changed her a bit. But everyone changes over time. ^_^ Draco also seemed like his regular self. Like Hermione though, I get the feeling he changed.
Grammer: I spotted a few minor little errors.
- Instead of too, it's to. Only one 'o'.
This is where we met.I suppose you don’t remember,it'skind of fuzzy for me.”
- There should be a space between those two sentences. There should also be a space in between it's and kind.
“One,we met in Hogwarts. And Two,I do remember thank you, those were killer heels you were wearing that day.”
- A space is needed between one and we. Two does not need to be capitalized. A space between two and I is needed.
Description: Your description was good though there wasn't too much of it. I do think maybe a little more description would be nice but that's just my opinion. :D I liked how you kept things nice, simple and clear and how you didn't go all out with the purple prose.
Dialogue: I enjoyed the dialogue in this chapter. It remained very true to the characters. I could really see Hermione and Draco saying those things.
End Impression: The end didn't really satisfy me. I liked Hermione's thoughts on young couples; that could've been a great place to explain more about Draco and Hermione and their relationship.
Overall Thoughts: I think this is a pretty good Dramione, actually. You should work a little more on filling in readers who haven't read Soho Evenings. Other than that though, I thought you did a brilliant job! :)
-LizaAuthor's Response: Okay, thanks. and the lack of gaps was probably due to the way my beta has sent the text to me, so i will change that.
When I re-read the first chapter i decided that maybe i need some more explanation, i will get round to it. I have just got a lot of things going down at the moment.
I will also edit the summary for you.
Thanks :D Report Review
why yes i do know what to do, as i am doing it right now:). this story is getting better and better keep up the writing. please let me know when you update.Author's Response: oh i will, :D its cool you like it :D Report Review
Love it !! So good to be back with your Hermione and DracoAuthor's Response: ah yes i have missed them so. there are some brilliant chapters coming up. so cute and teddy is involved. they are adorable. Will get them out asap. tho to check out bouquet of loves Report Review
Good, I like the beginning to the Sequel, Not so keen on Cassi getting ill as she is a darling baby, but something intresting has to happen.
Keep going with it! I love it Author's Response: I am but atm Im sorting out other bits and bobs and also writing cos atm i dont know where the story is going but we shall see.
thanks for your review. Report Review
Nice beginning really nice!!Author's Response: its just like soho evenings, if you haven't read it i reckon that you should cos it will explain a lot Report Review
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