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Review #1, by TeamRon Consider Me Gone

29th September 2011:
I’m normally not a fan of song fics, but I really enjoyed this. It made me sad, but Lucy can do better than him. I felt sorry for her when she leaned in for a kiss and he turned away. I loved the ending, and how she left the photo for him, even though I don’t think he’d want it.

I know Lucy wasn’t mentioned in the book, but you made her a strong character and I really liked her. I loved the mother and daughter talk, you made that perfect. I liked how she held back the tears until he was gone.

I really liked this story. I only noticed one mistake when it said “Jason was no closer to marrying her than he was three years ago when they moved in together three years ago.” There’s a second “three years ago” there. Good job and keep writing! 10/10!

Author's Response: Sorry for such a delayed response! Thank you so much for your review, and thank you for pointing out the fact that "three years ago" was doubled. I will definitely go fix that.

I really enjoyed writing Lucy - it was interesting to try and determine what type of personality she was being Percy's daughter, and of course as we know nothing about her mother.

Thanks again!
LJ


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Review #2, by moonbaby11 Consider Me Gone

27th April 2010:
Oh, wow. I really enjoyed that! :) Normally, I'm not really a fan of song-fics, but I really liked that!

It had a lot of depth and feeling in it. I felt really bad for Lucy and Jason, not being able to work it out. It was a really good ending.

The only thing I noticed was this sentence: '...no closer to marrying her than he was three years ago when they moved in together three years ago.' Just pointing it out! ;)

Oh yeah, and is Jason Ernie Macmillian's son?

Lovely banner. It really want with the story and I'm glad you picked it! :D

Thanks for entering the challenge and good luck!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I apologize for the long delay in responding to you!

I am glad that you enjoyed the story and the ending. I really enjoyed writing this one! Thanks for pointing out that mistake, I will make sure to fix that!

Yes, Jason is Ernie's son!

Thanks again!
~LJ


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