Loving this story. I like how everything is unfolding at a good pace. You write really well - I was pulled in from the start! I kind of don't want them to fix the "binding" problem because I love when they're together. Hopefully by the time they figure out how to break the spell they will have admitted their obvious love for each other. Can't wait till the next chapter, keep up the great work!

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I love it. It's fantastic. I love the idea behind it and how their relationship is developing.
Luke is probably my favourite character.
Good work, keep writing and I hope uni is going well.
Liana xx

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I love this story so much! I'm always beyond excited when there's a new chapter. I hope you update soon!

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THIS CHAPTER MADE ME CRY! This is beautiful writing, thank you! :') I really hope Natalie lets Oliver back in soon, and lets James take care of her — they've been going at it for so long already haha. Love it to bits! (Worth the long wait HAHA.)

Update soon and good luck with uni!

x

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SO INTENSE!! And so good - I'm so glad you're still writing this, keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more!!! :)

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So happy there was an update! Love this story! :) I thought this chapter was great! :)

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love the story. keep at it and update soon

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Glad to see Natalie catching on and opening up to James. Glad to see her finally let go and ...Well, it's kind of a relief, though I'm sure there's lots more to come that'll be hard to go through. James is admirable as well -trying to be there for her all the time, not giving up.
You write wonderfully. Love it.

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OK I love your story and please tell me they get together soon.:D Please please update soon!!

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please update!

-amy

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OMG! I love your story it's so amazing :) why can't she see the love that's clearly written all over James and Albus's face :( Tiy write really well by the way. It all fits perfectly and I'm really excited for the next chapter. Please update : D

~LoVe_Sirius

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Hey,
this is so sweet! JAMES AND NATALIE ARE MY OTP HAHAHA. They are really really cute and I love that you're making them such a problematic couple lol like they absolutely refuse to get together!! HELLO!!
(A bit confused about the death part?)
Thank you for updating this made my day!
Update soon! :-)

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Absolutely love it :) You're doing a brilliant job!

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I reallly like this story! :)

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i love this story! so glad you were able to update! :) can't wait till the next chapter! :)

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Hi there! I really loved reading this chapter, it was great! For some reason I really love Daphne's character, even though we haven't seen her a whole lot so far in the story.

Looking forward to New Year's with the Weasleys and finding out whether or not Natalie gets in touch with her Dad. :)

Thanks for the fantastic chapter, you're a great writer! :) 10/10

- F

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I loved it.

And I know how hard it is sometimes to write with life in the way, so thank you for this chapter ♥

It was perfect.

- Abhi

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Too short :( but Happy New Year to you too! May 2013 bring you joy! :)

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GR! This is just getting ridiculous!

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Natalie is very, very frustrating! For a girl known for her intelligence, she's really, really slow ;). James could hardly make his feelings more obvious. Maybe, underneath her insecurities about James' feelings, she's just afraid to let herself fall for something good.

Hope you'll update soon!

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It's a little frustrating, how they like each other, but won't know that for a while still (I guess). I like the story though, it's brilliant. I like their characters, the details, the family issues, careers, how they deal. I like how you describe her feelings, how she sees James and that it's not all easy. I wonder if James tries to 'win her over', so to speak -especially after he sees her reactions to him in this chapter and is pleasantly surprised. I also wonder about Al and how that's going to play out. I'm looking forward to seeing more of both of their families, during their holidays.
You're writing an amazing story and I really, really like it. Cheers!

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asdfghjkl;
stop torture us with all that tensions!! Just get them snog!!!

10/10

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awww an update!! Love you and love this story! so amazing :) just hope James and Natalie get it together soon :)
please update soon, can't wait for it!!

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Ooooh, they're getting closer!! I really love this story and am looking forward to reading more as ever :)
Thanks for updating - I can sympathise with how hard uni is!
Update again soon :)

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Ohhh my goodness, you've made me an upset mess! :P This chapter was just so sweet and well written, it was amazing!

I've said it before, but I love how you slowly reveal more about character's personalities, and now we can kind of understand Natalie and her quirks/insecurities now.

I'm so glad you justified why she is the way she is. So many stories just say: "This character is guarded, end of story." Whereas you've said "This charcter is guarded, because..." and given reasons behind their personality traits.

Yeah... That was a bit of a rambling mess.oh well :)

And Kate! Oh my gosh, I was not expecting this! :o I kind of assumed she had supported Oliver in the divorce or something and so Natalie didn't talk to her. It's so sad, and now I just want to hug Natalie. :(

Anyway, I should pull my blubbering mess of a self together :P Magnificent writing, this chapter was brilliant!

- Faith

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