ahhh! I love this!! Its so good! i looove sirius...hes awesome. hahah. i really like the part where aileen is like "...I mean... you kinda do look like an orange... Maybe a mandarin...” I laughed at that part for like a minute straight. And ughhh...danica is really annoying! hahah.
I loved the first chapter a lot too! (wow. i loved a lot of things apparently) I cracked up at the part where it said They seemed to have fit together perfectly, just like a pair of matching, checkered socks. bahaha. socks. i also liked the part where aileen knocked sirius' chair over. :D my favorite part was definitely when sirius was like “Yeah, unless you want me in yours.” he winked, growling seductively for a tease. i dont know why, i just couldnt stop laughing at that.
you are such an amazing author! keep up the awesome work! :))Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're the only one that has reviewed on this story and this has been one of my favourite stories to write. I finished it SO quickly and everything just came out really easily. So thank you :) Report Review
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