I really liked this, even though it was a little short. It's really a great fic and I am interested to read more of your writing if you post something else.
-gingerAuthor's Response: Thank you! Sorry it's so short. Report Review
This is pretty good :D I liked how you described the characters. It was a bit short, but it was sweet, and your style is impressive and I love it. XD Good job.Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reviewing and making my day. I know it's short, but it's all I could think of from that era. The founders have always intrigued me. Thanks! Report Review
That was really good, but I think they should've contemplated what to do a little longer. Also, the first paragraph could've been split into two. :)
~needapenname~Author's Response: Hi, needapenname!
Thanks so much for the review. it really made my day. I'm definitely going to split that paragraph and maybe altar their thoughts.Thanks a ton!
P.S. are you looking for a penname? Try using your favorite character, or a quote that you love from the books. Use a pairing (ex. Harry+GinnyForever) or a characteristic about your favorite character (ex. crazyLuna) My friends sorted me into Hufflepuff and named me Susan Bones, so I used SusieBones. Just a thought! Report Review
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