Wow. Just wow. The description in this is just amazing and it flows so well but leaves so many questions in a good way! I love how you made it so perfect and how it flowed so well. Mentioning in the butterfly was amazing and I just cannot describe hoe amazing this is! 10/10!Author's Response: wow. thank you. It took a few attempts and then I got it to work. I'm glad that you like it so much. Report Review
I just listened to this on the HPPC, and had to come to the story. It is absolutely brilliant. The emotions are so real, and the thoughts behind it spark something deep down inside your very core, where the love exists.
This piece is one of the most brilliant and moving things I've read on this site. I can't believe it doesn't have more reviews. I'll definately be checking out some more of work work, as this is truly riveting. Job well done.Author's Response: OMM I sound so lame... and I am so glad that you liked it :D
Really? The most brilliant and moving? well thanks I suppose...no ones told me that before.
Thanks Report Review
loved it!!! its sad but dang yeah its very sad.Author's Response: It's supposed to be, I'm glad that i can spark emotions in you.
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it :D Report Review
Your story is a really beautiful idea. The combination with the music is lovely. Well done.Author's Response: thanks i have suddenly come over all classical and i have an addiction to classical music and i was inspired by this.
initially it was a Harry Ginny one then i read through the first paragraph and realised who may couples this applied to so i left it that way Report Review
Wow. I'm amazed. You are great this is such an original idea. I love it.
P.S. 10/10Author's Response: thank you, i love the music most of all Report Review
This is amazing ! I love it the music fits so well !Author's Response: thanks so much, my beta loved it too ;D Report Review
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