I love this! It's a really good concept! My name's Tori, I can really relate. How do you pronounce her real name though? Is it Victoria like mine? Great story, though. Brilliant :)

Author's Response: First off, thanks for the review! Second, her real name is Victoire (Pronounced: Vik-twar) which is French for victory.

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Love it! Keep it up, & great idea! More chapters!!

Author's Response: Well thank you!

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I really liked this story:) it was so good and it's a creative idea too!

Author's Response: thanks! i wish i could write more often. Sorry i took so long to respond. Nobody ever reviews, so i just stopped checking my inbox. Haha. Thanks again for the review.
-Tori

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I like it:) just a minor mistake. Teddy would graduate 2015/16 and Albus is seen starting Hogwarts in 2017/18 so therefore Albus wouldn't be on the train in Victoire's first year without Teddy as this would be the schoolyear 2016/2017 a year before Albus would start.

Author's Response: sorry, i didn't really clarify very well. That part of the chapter takes place when Victoire is 16 and Al is 11. Teddy is two years older than Victoire and that's why he isn't on the train with her. Thanks for reading! and sorry i didn't clarify that very well.
-Tori

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Great story.
Can you put all the other's too?
I would love to see all the children's memories.
( Don't forget to put Lily, James, Albus, Rose, and Hugo. )
When will the next chapters come up?
Keep up the fab work

Author's Response: Don't worry there will be another chapter posted in the near future, and i think i would die if i forgot Rose, Lily Hugo,James and Albus.thanks so much for your review.
-Tori

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Well Victoire is born in 2000 or 2001 so are you sure it's supposed to say May 2 2005? It would be her 4th or 5th birthday.. But great story though :)

Author's Response: haha. yeah math isn't my thing, but thanks sooo much for the review. i'll have to do a double check on that date. thaks again.
-Tori

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I think you are really good. Its a very good start to a story. Pls continue.

Hey! :) Now your'e my bestest friend :) :) :)

Author's Response: Thanks sooo much for your review. it really means a lot to me that people take the time to give me advice and compliments. :) and thanx for being my best friend!

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Wow what a great idea for a short story collection, and I loved this first chapter. Please write more :)

Author's Response: thanks sooo much for your review. it really meant a lot to me. chapter 2 is awaiting validation and chapter 3 is in the writing process. thanks again!
-Tori

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