How could this not convince her? Oh my god, I just fell in love with Sirius Black AGAIN! XD
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I dont know about your beta, but I am most certainly convinced - he's hot.
Though it could have been a little longer? Had more depth you know?
Still I liked it!
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Wow. Simply amazing. Sirius Black is a total hottie; emmapotter is slightly mad, no offence to her. I love this love this love this! :) 10/10 Report Review
lol. so typical Sirius Black. Though i agree with u that Sirius Black is very caliente :) Report Review
I definitely agree with you on Sirius Black. And I hope your beta changes her mind. I really like this little story. Your descriptions are some of the best I've read. Report Review
I think you, my friend, are excellent at descriptions. :P Though you failed to make me see the hotness of Sirius Black, you have left me saying, "Wow! That was an amazing piece of work!" xD
Excellent work, honey! I love this nonetheless! A definite good read and shall be recommending to my besties! :D
Ak~Author's Response: You are a doll, you know that :D Thanks so much honey! Report Review
Great story i liked it and.I agree Sirius Black is HOT!Author's Response: I'm glad you think so, love :D I knew I wouldn't be alone in that analysis! Report Review
write a sirius black/OC story. Hmppf, with me as the OC puhhleeassse.
You're so brilliant, amazing, lovely (even though I'm not your beta), beautiful (even though I've never met you)...I can keep going.
Just saying, I would be a perfect character for Sirius to, er, well cuddle with or have sex with or whatever it is you want to make me do with him.
Oh, good one shot...even if it was just for fun.Author's Response: You're a doll and I love you!!
You always make me laugh, honey :D
And let me see what I can do about the whole you and Sirius... cuddling thing :D
Thanks for the review!! Report Review
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