Nice mate, hope to see your next chapterAuthor's Response: Thanks. Hopefully that's soon. :) Report Review
Hey there! You were right, it's a great story...love how your characters seem to actually be the characters we know and act as the trio and Ginny would probably act. What's wrong with Harry? Post soon!
LanaAuthor's Response: Thank you. :) I tried to capture their personalities as best I could. It was necessary in order for the story to work. As it progresses I want to emphasize on who they are and how the war changed them. Along with some twists and all that good stuff. :)
I'm afraid I won't be able to post until summer. :/ I'm hoping to graduate high school in a few weeks and I've made that my top priority.
Anyways, thank you so much for checking out my story. :) Hope you stick along. I'ma go read chapter 3 of yours now. ;)
-Krystal Report Review
I think you've done a good job of capturing the post-battle mood. I'm excited to see where you are going to take this story. Nice start.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'll try my best not to disappoint. :) Report Review
I really like this story so far, I love how it has a sort of moody, angsty feel to it and I hope that you can keep that up without it becoming overbearingly moody and dark. Anyways, I hope you can update soon because I'd really like to read more.Author's Response: Thank you so much. That was really what I was going for and I'm glad you caught it AND loved it. It means alot. :) Report Review
Harpy, not Harpie. Writing with CAPS lock and repetitive vowels is poor. Use words to describe the inflections of speech, not what you did.Author's Response: i thought the same thing...but it is Harpie...i made sure.
I'll keep that in mind. I'm using this site to improve my writing skills so I appreciate your honesty. :) Report Review
I had to read your story after you said mine inspired you:) Like what I have read so far, the summary is really intriguing, I hope you won't make Harry cheat on Ginny, but I have a feeling you will, which is something I am not going to like:)
Anyway, good luck, hope to see an update soon.Author's Response: Thanks for reading it! :) I really appreciate it. Oh, btw. I've made a banner for the story but I have no idea how to put it. Can you help? Report Review
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