So I'm here for your review for the cliche challenge!
This was such an adorable start to this story. I love your style of writing it is very flowy and flawless. I also thought that your characterisations of Narcissa and Frank were adorable, spot on (as they can be in AU). I really think it was quite daring to try out this ship and then write it in the AU manner. I know a lot of authors would have ruined it, but I really think that you have pulled it off.
Great start love and congratulations on finishing the challenge :D
xAuthor's Response: Thank you lovely! I'm flattered by your flattery, because I really don't think this is a good story at all. XD It's actually quite awful, but I want to complete it anyway...
I'm still blushing, days later - and I do adore Narcissa/Frank, so although this will be their last story (promise!), I'll try and make it decent...from chapter 3 onwards.
- emma xx Report Review
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