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Review #1, by padfoot1204 Prénoms

16th April 2010:
oooh so sad when vic couldnt have children to name her own =,(
i felt like crying...i love it though! teddy and victoire are meant to be =3
10/10

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!

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Review #2, by hpfan45 Prénoms

12th April 2010:
awww, that is probably the cutest one shot i read, with a nice closure. i usually don't like/ read one shots because of this reason, but i liked your other story so much i decided to see what else you wrote.

honestly you could of made this a whole long story, but i think the point comes across nicely the way it. i loved vic and teddy in this, especially vic and her little thing of naming names.

becca xx

Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks for reading my other stuff as well, even though it's not much as of right now. You are too nice :3

Hmm...well, if Teddy/Victoire were to be together, I'd imagine them kind of like this, I suppose. I imagine them as simple and sweet, but I could never write a whole chapter novel about them, i don't think X.X

Hey, I used to avoid one-shots too, but now I love them XD

I'm glad you liked it!

-Jasaline


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Review #3, by Hermionniny9 Prénoms

10th April 2010:
-umm *wipes tear away*-wow, very very moving.
I'm a bit stuck for words at the moment, i suppose it didn't help that i was listening to Fatal Attraction at the same time as reading it but still.

i actually really really like this.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it! It's interesting that you found this moving, but yes, listening to music whilst reading something sad always adds to the emotional level of stories. :)

-Jasaline


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Review #4, by LindaSnape Prénoms

10th April 2010:
Oh, this was beautiful! I absolutely adored it! It was so terribly sad, though, for her.

I suppose, in the end, she's content, but it would be sad to have all those lovely names picked out and yet no child to call her own. When she had the miscarriage I was so disappointed. I was hoping that she'd be able to have a child, but that didn't happen, either.

Though, she still managed to be happy in the end.

I love the characterization of Victoire and her reaction when Dominique was going to have an abortion. I think that it was very realistic, given the personality you gave Vic. I couldn't believe that Dom was so tactless.

It seemed evident that Vic loved children.

I didn't see any glaringly obvious spelling or grammatical errors, so kudos there. It does make things flow easier when there's nothing to jar the reader's focus.

The word choices were absolutely phenomenal and I loved the poetic tone of this piece. It was terribly romantic and yet so tragic, yet so beautiful. All at once.

It was very poetic. I enjoyed that, very much.

Very nice job!

Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you liked it! (blushes)
You are too nice, as I am not too used to these compliments. =P

I've never been a huge Teddy/Victoire shipper or reader but I thought this suited Victoire a lot. I've always imagined Victoire to be like that, a little whimsical and emotional and an exteme romantic.

As for the poeticness, I've been experimenting a lot with different plots and styles, so thank you! This means a lot :)


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