You have a gift with words, and I'll be very disappointed if you don't write professionally. Even a few short stories for a compilation. I just want to be able to purchase your writing and know that I've spent my money well, for I would gladly pay for your stories. This is awesome (and I mean that in the traditional meaning of the word, not the modern slang version). The touch of mystery is so lovely, though I must admit it is somewhat confusing. In my mind she died, but I suppose that's just my creative license as a reader.

Thank you for writing this (:

- Light

Author's Response: thank for your beautiful word.
you'll find that none of my other stories are like this one. the other are very.. err.. childish? immature? unprofessional? compared to this one.
it was meant to be confusing... i did have a longer story for this in mind and this was supposed to the first chapter and next chapter would start from the train ride.. but i decided to concentrate on the one major story i have on now...
im so glad you like it, it was a very inspired piece that i spent awhile making sure very thing was sort of melodic and had some kind of yearning to it

thank you :)

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Beautiful.
So different too, and real.

Author's Response: thank you :)

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Wow so moving, it is a v. v. good one shot

Author's Response: THANK YOU :) thank you very much :D

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that is beautiful, you have a magical power with words, a real gift. i really felt his pain thats amazing.

Author's Response: magical power? o i always wanted to have magical powers :) well thank you very much, your review means tons :)

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That was amazing! you are just too good of a writer, so cute and loving, great one-shot!

Author's Response: thank you :) a good writer eh? hehe thanks :)

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oh my days.
wow.
flippin heck.
amazing and beautifully written.
added to favourites.
Its and incredibly powerful one shot.
R :) x

Author's Response: thank you :) your reviews make my day :)


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Hey,
Your story is really good, i was wondering if you were going to change it into something longer i would definatley read it.
Just one thing that annoyed me, you don't actually say why she had to leave.
Apart from that it was great!

Author's Response: i was thinking of turning it into a longer story.. so keep a look out for.. and if i told you why she had to leave that would ruin the rest of it :)

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