YAY! I read this story twice and I loved it both times! And also, Hello! And thank you for competing in my challenge.
I think you've done a marvelous job. It was light-hearted and fun, and the situation in itself was so comical. But also, plausible. I could totally see George being forced to do something like that by his wife! I also really enjoyed your characterization of George here too. I think you nailed him with his love of pranking, but also his superior business and marketing scale. Fred, too, was a lovely characterization. Over all, very well done and so cute.Author's Response: Hi! :) Haha, and thank you for issuing this challenge, then!
Oh, I'm very happy to hear that! I thought the situation would be funny, too, so I'm glad that you thought the final product was good!
It's also great to hear that the characterisations were good, and poor George, of course, being forced by his wife to do such a thing!
Thanks for all your compliments! :D I'm very glad you liked it! Report Review
Aw, this was cute. (: I'm a member of the same challenge, and I thought this was very nice. I thought this was realistic; when George told Fred to behave, I was very sad at how George had sold out. ):
And by the way, I was very confused when I didn't read that this was a Next Gen. xD I thought it was Fred and George, and I was wondering who the father was.
Poor George! I want to know what Angelina said... Though, if she married him, she can't have been too harsh. George is just too darn adorable. (:
This was a really cute one-shot, and I liked reading it very much.
-JasmineAuthor's Response: Thanks! :)
Oh, I'm very sorry xD Perhaps I should've made that clearer, then...
Hehe, I agree, she didn't marry him for nothing! I don't think she would've been too harsh on him. After all, he did tell Fred to behave, like she told him to ;)
I'm glad you enjoyed reading this! If you want to, let me know when your story's up, then I'll R&R that too :)
Thanks again!! Report Review
I really enjoyed this story. I've never read one focused on Fred before so I thought that was quite original. I can't find anything to fault, hence the 10/10!
MacSweeny xxAuthor's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! 10/10? Thanks!! :D Report Review
Hahaha how funny!!! Really enjoyed it =]Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D Report Review
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