Nice, I liked it a lot. A bit confusing word choice at some points, but good

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:O

Wow this was very dark. I liked how you portrayed Rose and Scorp. In most NetGens they are sappy and in love with each other, since this one was just a oneway love it made it that more stalkerish.

Well done!! I will PM you if you made the top 3!!!

Author's Response: hi!
thank you for the kind review! I am glad you like it.
I am very glad to have participated in your challenge!
thanks again!
x

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Wow this was really well written!
Seriously! It was short, but the ideas you conveyed in it were amazing!
I'm so sad for Rose.. but Scorpius sounds so mean :(
Fantastic writing though :)

Author's Response: hi!
thank you for the kind review! I am glad you liked it!
I know it is kind of a different Rose/Scorpius story, but that's what I wanted to do. Actually, I didn't mean to make Scorpius mean :p
thanks again!
x

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Hello

And well done on such an unusal but enjoyable one shot, Charly :D x

Author's Response: hi!
thank you for the kind review!
x
Sophie

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Wow, that was powerful. I'm also in this challenge -- although my character still hasn't been posted =S But wow, that's really something to contend with.

Bravo!

xE

Author's Response: hi
thank you for the kind review! I'll make sure to review your entry too. Good luck!
x
Sophie

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