It's not plausible that you haven't written a story for over a year. Because this is made out of pure win. And I'm not saying this because I love you, but because this is a very intriguing way of starting a story. I'm hooked. :)
And I'm adding you to my favorites, so there's no chance of it escaping my notice now! :DAuthor's Response: Eeps! *hides from pouncing*
Awwwh! *blushes* Thank youu! You're really not doing any good for my ego, know that? :D I'm really glad you liked it! Most of my first chapters always seem shorter, but it should hopefully get better - my introductions are pretty dim :P
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *squishes* You're awesome ^_^ Report Review
Good piece! I'm interested how you will twist this one. I hope that Hermione remains in character.Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really glad you liked it and you'll see about the twist :D I hope I can keep her IC too ^_^ Thanks again! :D Report Review
The way you put things (your prose?) is beautiful. I think I'm hooked. Keep writing!!!Author's Response: Eeee! Thank you so much! So glad you liked it! And Chapter 2 is currently in progress! Thanks for reading and reviewing : D Report Review
Duuude this guy sounds hot. If a bit creepy. I'm into him. I liked it! Very intense. You have good paragraph swappiness...if you get my drift. Your descriptions make it easy to picture the scenes :P
Lemme know when you put the next chapter up!
If FL doesn't get in the way of course...
Cheese.Author's Response: hahaha! Yeahhh he's meant to be a little on the weird side - too much inspiration from moody characters ;p HAHA You spend too much time reading my paragraphs? rotfl! Thanks so much for the review!
Thank youuu! *hugs* Report Review
Yay! First review! Great start for the first chapter. I love the way you describe everything, it offers some great imagery. First chapters aren't always the longest, so don't feel bad that it's short. I can't wait to see more of this story, please hurry and update soon! I give this chapter 10/10 :)Author's Response: Yay for a review! Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you liked it - it means a lot! It's taken a fair bit to get back in to fanfics but I plan to stay and complete most of mine off now :D Thank you very much and the second chapter is currently being written =D Report Review
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