Ha Ha well now she won't feel so alone. I can't wait to see were this is going. Report Review
I liked it. It was amazingly witty. She reminds me of myself ALOT! Great start. I favorited it.
P.S If you get the chance please read and review my story The Other Side of Me. PLEASE!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you saw the wittiness I was trying for. Report Review
hey. haha sorry, im bored.
but i really like your story!
i think all the not dialogue is witty and hilarious!
but the dialogue seems a little...over the top.
but i still like it a lot!!!Author's Response: I know. The dialogue was a little forced and that'Âs why it came out that way. I don'Ât feel like editing the chapter when I JUST posted it, but I will eventually. I'Âll try to make the dialogue better in the next chapter; please tell me if I succeed! And I'm glad you like it over all. :) Report Review
this looks like the start to a good storyAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
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