I like the quote and i reaally feel georges pain in this chapter, i liked it a lot xAuthor's Response: oh wow, thank you. I love the twins and i really wanted to write something for them. :) Report Review
Birthday Challenge. Review #12.
Hello! I'm running a tight schedule in trying to get another 8 reviews done in 30 minutes, so sorry if this has typos and is all over the place ^.^
This is really beautiful. It flowed lovely from start to finish and I actually felt Georges pain. I have always had a fondness for the twins though, so that might be why xD.
I'm a bit of a nitpicker sooo...
Dinner at the Burrow, We all go once a month. - The comma should either be a full stop, or you should make the W lowercase.
I loved these lines: When will I be able to look in the mirror and just see George?
Iím not even half the man I used to be.
Just because of those, I'm so glad I don't have a twin. It must be horrible, and you've managed to capture George's pain pretty well with this. The whole two twins make one person, one twin doesn't even make half a person is really beautiful.
Lorren.Author's Response: Thank you very much, im awful with grammer and spelling so your 'nitpicking' is much apreciated :) Report Review
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