This story is not as bad as you make it out to be. You say that you posted this about a year ago, well the chances are that you've improved since then and I reckon you could go back and sort out anything your not happy with. But keep the plot, I think its quite good. 9/10.Author's Response: Awh, thanks :)
What you say is completely true. I hope I have improved in being a writer, and I should most definitely edit this piece a bit! (but i'm a little lazy).
I guess it's my fault then! Anyway, thank you! I'm glad you think the plot is actually okay.
Thanks for the lovely review and the kind words! Sorry this response is so late, I hope you know your review is most definitely appreciated. Thank you! :) Report Review
I know you say in your summary not to read this. :P But since I'm leaving a review for each of your stories, I couldn't very well leave this off, now could I? Besides, it'll give me a good reference point to gauge how your writing may have improved since you posted this story. I'll keep the review short, though.
I wouldn't say this story is entirely awful as you mention in your summary--it's way too soon to tell! However, I did find a few things a bit confusing, and I've never been a huge fan of the whole introduce Muggle classes to Hogwarts thing. The biggest thing, though, was that a few little details didn't make sense to me. I can see you made an effort to explain things, but you hadn't quite figured out how to do it effectively yet.
I know this wasn't a super happy review, but I'm glad I read this, since as I said, it'll give me a reference point for your more recent stories. :) On to the next!Author's Response: OH NO. You did not read this.. YOU DID NOT?! Honestly.. this is so horrible I feel embarrassed to have it up.. but for some reason, I can't bear to delete it.. O_O
Hehe, thanks anyway! Yes, although I wrote this less than a year ago, I like to think that I write with more sense now XD.
Hehe, thanks for the review and not saying that it's as horrible as I think it is ;) Report Review
Hmmm. Very interesting. I've never seen anything like this. Very original. I always wondered if wizards learned math! I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I'm glad you think so!
I definitely need to edit this chapter, it's very boring!
but soon I'll put a new chapter up! Thank you :) Report Review
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