{reviewid: 2625208, reviewer: 'Eli'}
5th December 2011:
Seriously? No just no. Plot sucks, Spelling and everything totally SUCKS! I'm sorry for being rude but it's a review isn't it?
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{reviewid: 2470107, reviewer: '%3F%3F%3F'}
24th January 2011:
:(
decent plot, horrible grammar and writing
you go to school for something, don't you?
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{reviewid: 2467966, reviewer: 'AnnabethChase2149'}
20th January 2011:
Uhh, Grammer problems much? Wow that just SUCKED. Srry for the negativity but it did.
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{reviewid: 2436307, reviewer: 'gothgurl08'}
16th November 2010:
this story is awesome!!! tho i did notice that u wrote that hermione had a tear fall down her cheek, and in the book the vampires cant cry, they do what i call the "dry sob". i just thought u might want to know. :) keep those chapters comming!
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{reviewid: 2432929, reviewer: '%3F%3F%3F'}
8th November 2010:
Your story is awesome, but you seem to have some grammar errors consider correcting them? Keep writing you are really good. :)
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{reviewid: 2372116, reviewer: 'benny08jenson'}
2nd July 2010:
loved it...please update soon
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{reviewid: 2371676, reviewer: 'mizzimays'}
2nd July 2010:
this is good alot of spelling and grammer mistakes but still good please continue :)
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{reviewid: 2341585, reviewer: 'benny08jenson'}
2nd May 2010:
Loved it as always and can't wait to read the update..
Jenn
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{reviewid: 2341263, reviewer: 'mineforever'}
2nd May 2010:
I love this!! :)
plz continue :)
i thought it was great and i cant wait for more chapters!! :) update sooon
xx
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{reviewid: 2339007, reviewer: 'invain'}
27th April 2010:
Nice. Just like at Hogwarts except they're in muggle school. :)
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{reviewid: 2338545, reviewer: 'benny08jenson'}
26th April 2010:
loved it and can't wait to read the next chapter!
Jenn
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{reviewid: 2333825, reviewer: 'crazzzzy%20fan'}
17th April 2010:
well was fine .go on completing it
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{reviewid: 2333676, reviewer: 'benny08jenson'}
17th April 2010:
can't wait to read the next chapter, I loved it!
jenn
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{reviewid: 2333659, reviewer: 'hermione999'}
17th April 2010:
I love your story you had a couple of capitalization and grammer errors, but besides that it was awesome! Update soon! :D
PS Look up my story and leave a review PLEASE!
Author's Response: i know i have grammer issue but im glad you like it =] thanks
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{reviewid: 2325903, reviewer: 'Chrissy'}
4th April 2010:
I like where your going with this, i hope you continue it!
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{reviewid: 2325808, reviewer: 'stupidgirl'}
4th April 2010:
People really need to stop crossing twilight and Harry Potter. It's never going to happen.
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{reviewid: 2325277, reviewer: 'benny08jenson'}
4th April 2010:
watching for the update.
Jenn
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{reviewid: 2325264, reviewer: 'oceansweetie'}
4th April 2010:
Horrible grammer, lady... or man... I donno... Anyways, "that my story till draco black or malfoy as i use to know him step into my life"? Proper grammer:
That's my story until Draco Black, or Malfoy as I used to know him, stepped into my life.
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