This is a lovely story!

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Ohmygosh, this was beautiful. I loved their stupid legends, I loved the story-telling, I loved the pace-egging and hdsaivhyuisd gah, I don't know what to say, except for that I loved it ALL. Remus and Sirius have always been my one and only slash, and you reminded me just how much I really loved them. 10/10

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Fantastoc. Loved it 10/10 : )

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It is perfect, although if could use a little wee bit more slashiness.

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IHJGUIDZGfzlijshdshnlk! I wrote you an amazing review then I accidentally deleted it all! URGHGHGHFHFBKJBVBVKHDH!!!

Let me see if I can try to write you a new one, mmkay?

So.

I loved how this isn't normal slash where there're two horny teenage boys and blah blah blah and all that.

Nope.

Sirius thought his feelings through, and I wasn't even realy sure if wittle Moony liked him back until the very end. I also liked that the whole story wasn't just full of a bunch of Maraudery banter.

If anyone EVER tells me they don't like slash, I will refer them to this story because this is Slash Well Done.

I would also like to say that I proclaim you a Very Good Author, maybe even my Favorite Author.

:D

-Lexie

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Eastery enough. Chocolatey enough. Slashy enough.

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First thing is first. YOU owe ME a new cup of coffee because I spit half out laughing at your various Pie lines! Now, on to the review.

Brilliant. It was just so *sigh* is there a word better than brilliant? If there is, then this was it. I loved how reserved it was. It wasn't rushed or forced, it was deep and thoughtful and paced so perfectly. I can see that One Shot ending up a drawn out Multi-Chapter because the pacing and the tension was just so beautifully done.

*goes to recommend to ... everyone* 10/10 for sure! I'd give it a 20 if I could. --Jenna

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Aw! It’s so unbelievably cute and adorable. Especially Remus being very mature to hide his immaturity and Sirius being very immature to hide deep thoughts.or I’m seeing things that aren't there but I still like it. It’s well written and has a well thought out plot line. And r/s smooches but that's a given.

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Puppy love. Sweet. haha, amazingly well written and just adorable!!(:

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It's bloody AMAZING! So cute and so perfect and so chocolatey and nuuur fantasticness!r *squee* Ten of ten, and I'd give you a hundred if only it'd let me.

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ha ha loved it! tell me if you've written more or if you are going to expand on this one! its really good!
good luck with future stories
Loganx

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As a Sirius/Remus addict... it was perfect! :)

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I liked it. It was well written, some of the best I've seen in a while. I tip my hat to you.

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