I love it!
I've always loved these types of stories, so please continue it!
I think you portraye Dommy perfectly!^^ I love her!
again, please continue ASAP!
10/10

Author's Response: Awe, Thank you. I'm glad that you like it.
I've been working on the next chapter and it should be up really soon. I am almost finished with it.
And I'm glad you like Dom. She is one of my favorite characters.

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I want to know what happened to Nate; like really badly! :(
And good progress is happening.
I just love this story.

- SexyDoorFrames

Author's Response: You will find out in a couple chapters. It will be a long drawn out process. :[
I'm so glad that you do.

-Maria

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I love this story. I love Nate. I love everyone. Did I mention I love it? The plot line is super interesting. Like fo shizzle. Though I have no idea what that means. I really like the way the plot is developing. And Nate is getting more interesting and rounded with each chapter you come out with. I really like your take of Albus too, it's really interesting.

I like the way you're taking this story. I'm going to be nosy and ask, how long do you think this story will be? I just want to know when to start mourning the story.

Anyway, I think I babbled and stopped making sense. I spend too much time in the HPFF forums. It's mashing my brain.

So yeah, excellent story and I hope you update soon.

- SexyDoorFrames

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you love this story. I love Nate. She is epic. Yes, yes you did mention. But I am so glad that you do. It too me a while to come up with this story. It was so diffcult to come up with the story line.

Nate is amazing. She is so random and different. I love her. She is my favorite chacater. I love Albus too. He is so sweet, but confused.

To be honest, I believe it's going to be around 20 chapters. At least that is what I have planned out.

I spend way to much time on hpff.

Thank you, I will have updated this weeked.

-Maria

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The story still seems to be progressing along nicely. The chapters are a little on the short side and there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes throughout it all but other then that it looks good.

Author's Response: Thank you.

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i don,t know if ghost,s glide or float the only one i ever saw was always sitting in an old rocking chair. i just love this story

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm not sure either but I think they float or glide. lol.

-Maria

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i think your story is just great ,its a great idea

Author's Response: Thank you

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Interesting so far, can't really saw much about my real thoughts since the background isn't all there yet. Lily being in Slytherin is something I haven't come acrossed before so you get points for that.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you find it interesting. Don't ask my why, but I love the idea of Lily being in Slytherin. It makes life a little interesting.


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I like this story, it does not suck, and I love Nate.

xoxo
~Marcia

Author's Response: Aww. I'm so glad that you like it. :) That makes me smile. I adore Nate, so It makes me happy that you love her.

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Answers to your questions:

1)Do you like the story?
No. It's a lovely idea for a story, as a matter of fact. Randomosity rocks, does it not?

2)Do you think it sucks?
See above response.

3)How do you like Nate?
I like her quite a bit. Towards the beginning, she seemed to have quite a few random thoughts, which I can relate to since I have them about, oh, maybe every thirty seconds. What happened to her, I wonder. You must update and help quench my thirst for more.

10/10

-EI

Author's Response: Randomosity does rock, quite a bit. :)
I'm glad that you like this story.
I'm glad that you like Nate. She is rather random, but I just picture as this odd individual, who has a secert agenda. hehe.
I will update, I promise.
Thank you for the lovely review.
Maria


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