loved the chapter!! :) update soon please !Author's Response: Awww thank you. I will try :) Report Review
Lovely to see another chapter from you, and yet again, I really enjoyed it. Brilliantly written, and it was lovely to see Cesca getting closer to both her parents again. Hopefully Sirius does now get a chance to create his own family again. Anyways, brilliantly written (I know I said that already haha) and I loved the little playful exchange between Terese and Sirius. As usual, tis a 10/10 from me me dear.
James xxxAuthor's Response: It has been a while hasn't it!!! Been busy busy busy lol. I thought that it would happen sooner or later, and what better time than Christmas?? lol. And also thought that their old relationship would resurface. Aww thank you m'dear. As always the support is much appreciated :)
Sophxxx Report Review
Thanks for that i've been waiting so long haha!
Nice intimate story for the two of them, long overdue. Fantastic :)
Keep it up :)
xxxAuthor's Response: I have been slacking haven't I? My muse deserted me for a while there. I'm glad you liked it tho. Thank you :) Report Review
I love this chapter
TERESA/SIRIUS 4EVERAuthor's Response: :) Thank you!!
My sentiments exactly!! Report Review
I am loving the Terese series :)
Please keep it up!
xAuthor's Response: Thank you :) I'll try- awaiting the return of my muse!! Report Review
Awesome. I really like how it is going so far.Author's Response: :) thank you xxx Report Review
all of it was really good:) you are a very talented writer. i loved the random part where harry screamed "YOU KILLED MY PARENTS" it made me giggle alittle for the interuption of a tender moment:)Author's Response: Aw thank you!!! *blushes*
Well I figured Harry wouldn't allow that to be forgotten for too long. And it seemed like a tension breaker of sorts haha. Report Review
Aww, a flashback chapter and the introduction of Sirius,it's all good in this chapter ;) .Love the little scene where he first meets Cesca, and then them deciding what her name should be; guess that solves my curiosity as to whether Tess did have the curse put on her by Bella as well... Brilliant anyway, I especially like the first couple of paragraphs, him toying with going to see Tess, and his thoughts about Cesca, thought you got Sirius' character perfectly in this one :) Anyway, another fantastic chapter hun, really loved it :)
xxxAuthor's Response: I had a similar chapter written when I couldn't decide how to end Thatl- and I thought he'd have at least a few hours with his daughter...
Sirius' character seemed really easy to write here- really enjoyed writing it! Thankss yet again babe xxx Report Review
Aww, well I think you set the scene brilliantly there hun, Cesca's character especially seems brilliant already in this one, enough like the Cesca we all know and love to be recognisable, but different enough that you can tell that Sirius' influence has been missing. You have to sympathise with Tess as well, in previous stories, its only been her and Remus, but now with this extra person in the mix, you can see her protective nature coming to the fore again. Can't quite work out just what Remus and Tess's relationship is in this, but either way, I think he did a great job of diffusing the argument in this one, all in all, as brilliantly written as i'd ever expect from you hun, just great really :)
xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks again sweetie :). Well I wanted to keep her basic character, but she would be different without Sirius being around. And I think Terese would be overly protective, having nearly lost everything... As for her relationship with Remus... hmmm... well Francesca would always be Terese's priority so whether she'd notice Remus would like something more... Report Review
pretty good hope the next chapter will be more exicitng. I tried to read your other stories but you have so many alternatives and your summaries arent all to clear.Author's Response: Ah sorry about that- I'll try and post an order list somewhere later on Report Review
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