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Review #1, by dracos_hotter I

18th April 2010:
Trelawney in the Marauders era? Meh, it's a theory I'm willing to accept.

Hi there! I'm bamboomei on the forums, and this is my challenge =)

Aah, the discovery of a different side to someone... Yay Remus! He's not someone I'd consider as being stupid enough to get drunk and play dares, but then again... He is a Marauder... And as we all know, Marauder's just want to have fun.

I'm not sure if the quote fit quite well. I mean, it was in great context, but I think you could have built it up a little more.

Cassie and Trelawney actually seem to be from the same stock. They are both that type of person... The kind of misunderstood person on the fringe of society.


Author's Response: Ah I see what you mean. I'm glad you liked Remus here. Thanks for reviewing :)

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