This was good. Update soon please 8/10 : )

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Go josh!! Feel sorry for sam though 8/10 : )

Author's Response: Don't, Sam is a creep :p

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Naww that last bit where she said that she no longer cares whether she lives or dies because she was already inheaven was so sweet and sad. 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Aww, it was. Glad you liked it! :)

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Poor james. It wasn't even his fault. 8/10 : )

Author's Response: It wasn't :(

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Wow cat fight. That was entertaining. Alice isnt the nicest friend 9/10 : )

Author's Response: No she isn't!

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Hmm i guess I'll have to read on to find out whats wrong with her 8/10 : )

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This chapter was better 8/10 : )

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Sam sounds like a bt of a creep 7/10 : )

Author's Response: Oh he is x)

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At this stage things seem to be moving along slowly 7/10 : )

Author's Response: Don't worry, it gets fasterrr.

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Liked the tension between them 9/10 : )

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That was very short but good. 7/10 : )

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Forgot my password ^
This is nice, it does indeedly set the scene nicely xD
It'd be good if you put me in it more though.
Especially if you resurrect Dumbledore and make him my boyf xD
:D

Author's Response: But you're with Albus D:
tut tut Tess. Forgetting you're password.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY FOR THE 26TH XD
Such a mint friend me.
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when do you think you'll be puttin the next chapter up?? i absolutely love it. (:

Author's Response: In about a week maybe, still working on it.
Thanks!
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Whoo! About time now! ;)
Carlie and James are so cute together.
It's like, fluff that I should be naturally envious/disgusted with, but I just can't! They're adorable.
*insert various gushing over cuteness*
Okay, update soon pleasies! :D
-Mariah.

Author's Response: Hehe, yes, fluff that people love xD
Working on it :D

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Whooot whooot, new chapter!
This was nice.
As if Carlie's Grandma is Gwenog Jones! :0
How dare you buy my boyfriend that signed autobiography! Now what am I gonna buy him? :/ Hmmm...
Lemon mouse is really nice, just thought I would put that out there.

Author's Response: Oh I'm sorry ;D
It is nice. Now I want some. Damn.
Eric Northman is sexy, thought I'd put that in there. :D

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i love this, we're getting so far into Carlie.
Aww, James is a cutie.
Update soon!
xx

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Glad you're still here!
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Phew at last...
Update soon..
xoxo

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OH MY ROWLING! please update again sooN!

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josh and beth is def a yes!! so is carlie and james (of course). I really have no idea what the next chapter is about, so you need to put it up soon, kay?

~Hannah~

Author's Response: Working on the next chapter!
Thank you for your support and corrections throughout :')
xo

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you were right. it was really short. it was sad too. why'd you do that? cancer??

~Hannah~

Author's Response: Yup, cancer.
I wanted to put a twist on the story and this came to mind!
xo

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ah! now do I get to find out what carlie's deal is?? also, loved james' pov!

~Hannah~

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked James' POV!:)
xo

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well, secrets out... and alice is a b*. awkwardness to come, I suppose... keep checking for the same mistakes. also, I didn't think the fight scene was written badly :)

~Hannah~

Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't think the fight scene was written badly:)
Yup. Alice is pretty nasty.
xo

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ok, so next chapter we find out her little problem, but when is she gonna figure out the BIG guy problem she's got goin on??

~Hannah~

Author's Response: She'll figure it out soon enough!
xo

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hmm... what's the matter with her? and why is she having dreams about josh?!? that's james' job... sometimes you say "I was sat" when all you need is "I sat."

~Hannah~

Author's Response: Hmmm, what is the matter with her...
It is James job!
I'll change that!
Thank you for your continued support and corrections!
xo

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make sure it's exploding snaps, not snape, (even though that would be fun.) also keep it in the first person point of view. sometimes you mix up we/they and I/she. become the characters. except sam... I don't like him.

~Hannah~

Author's Response: Haha, yes exploding snape would be fun!
I changed it from third to first and I might have missed out some bits, but I'll change that right away!
xo

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