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Review #1, by oneoftheweasleys99 Chapter one Letters and Deaths

8th March 2012:
pretty good except, hermione rolls her eyes and bites her lip too much. but over all pretty good.

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Review #2, by Crista Chapter Four Discussion's and Head Common Room

8th March 2012:
Please learn how to spell. Interesting story so far though.

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Review #3, by Angelica Chapter Two Head Boy and flying puddings

8th March 2012:
You really need to learn past, present and future tenses for your verbs. Ex: "so you can snuck out later" it's SNEAK not snuck. It's quite annoying really.

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Review #4, by regin Chapter three Stalking and clues

19th July 2010:
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

Author's Response: hi thank you for your review. i'm back now so updating she happen as often as they can
lily times


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