I really liked it!!! I love your stories! You should write more James Report Review
I don't know your experience(s) or if you have had one but I would be careful about promoting such a vast age difference. I know that in many cases it works out and everything is fine but you should also, as an author be aware of what you are supporting. There are many older men who take advantage of 18-19 year old girls and younger and it may not be the best idea to glamourize a relationship like this in a forum directed at young women. That said, I really enjoyed your story :), nice characterization.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story, and the characterisations. For me, it is the most important part when it comes to writing, so I am so pleased to hear that you like it! :)
As for the other point, I hadn't actually considered it before. But I can see where you're coming from. I hope that those reading would be sensible enough to make their own decisions and judge people accordingly, if they were faced with the situation that involved the possibility of being taken advantage of. I didn't intend to glamorize anything when I wrote this piece, but I can completely see your point! Thank you for pointing it out; next time I have a moment or two, I will put a little mention in the authors note or something :) Report Review
You really like next generation don't you.Author's Response: Yes, I do :) I don't feel that I can capture cannon characters too well, and so I don't want to write a story when I personally feel I am going horribly wrong with it.
Thank you for the review. Report Review
I have read almost all of your stories, and still adore them. This is the second time I have read 'Life in a Motion Picture." I would love love love for you to make this a short story or even a novella but it's up to you. Hattie is beautifully described and I am in love with James. Cheers!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoy my stories! I always have a soft spot for this one-shot, I'm not too sure why!
I actually have this written on my computer up to about five chapters, but it just doesn't seem right to post them.
I may one-day write something similar, and make that in to a story, but until then ... thank you again! Report Review
LOVE. Once again. I couldn't not love your stories :)
Nothing more to say. Cute, fluffy, cute, cuddly. Cute. Yeah.
xxx sofia :) 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed this! You have been leaving me such lovely reviews, I am very grateful! :)
Thank you again, I loved writing this one-shot. Report Review
There is only one thing wrong with this. It's over :( I just love James Potter in here, and i love that there is a little bit of an age difference in it, it wouldn't be as belivable if it was all rainbows and unicorns. Truly awesome story :))Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review!
I'm really, really glad that you've enjoyed this one-shot. I love writing James Potter, and I think that it shows in this - at least I hope it does :D
Thank you again! Report Review
I...,I how could you leave it at that? I am begging you to try again with this. please. so beautifully written I was on the verge of tears for some reason at the end probably because I knew it would stop dead,please?Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :) I'm glad that you enjoyed this - or, at least, I'm hoping that you enjoyed this.
I'm sorry that you didn't like the ending. I had considered turning this in to a Novella, but I just got a little bored writing it - and that's not good.
I am editing this one-shot in a little while, for grammar and spelling, and also to make it a little more believable. But I'm afraid that I am rather fond of the ending :P
I wrote it like this so you could make your own ending for the characters, to give them the finish that you wanted, as the reader.
Thank you again for the review! And I'm sorry again that you weren't keen on the ending. Report Review
Very good story. I love it.Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :D Report Review
Loved it!! You're a really good writer :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much, you're lovely :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Report Review
I loved this one-shot! The rain was stressed so perfectly that it added to the story loads. There were a few fact errors like Victoire being Louis cousin and such but it was overall a great story. There were some parts that were a tad confusing but nothing too bad. I loved the descriptions of Hattie and James. They felt just so, real. Great job!Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed this! I love rain, I thought that it was about time that I wrote a story expressing something about my favourite weather. :D
Did I really put that Victoire was Louis' cousin? Wow, I'm really dim. I can't believe that I put that. :D
Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed this! Report Review
This was amazing, and a very long one shot.. :P
I have to say the beginning with the description of the rain didn't draw me in, but I kept on reading and after the first few chapters, I was fully hooked! The connection of rain between each section of the story was a nice touch, and so were your characters. Hattie's personality was well developed, as was Jame's, Willis' and Hannah's. It was interesting how James and Hattie met.
Generally just a really well written story, an enjoyable read!
:)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :D I'm glad that you enjoyed this - incredibly long - oneshot. :D I was thinking that before I posted it, I was like, ahhh, I'll just go with it :P
As for the rain, I will take another look at it, I admit, it was a bit of an over-description :D
Thank you again! Report Review
:D loved it one of my all time favourite one shots of James, i love the way you've characterised him especially when they're laid in bed, you're very talented :)
[=Miss Ginny Potter=]Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one-shot, and that you liked the characterisation of James. I was worried that I had made him a little too soppy. :D Report Review
hey! fantastic story! (=
i loved reading that, i could picture it all perfectly in my head. good writing! (i guess there are some errors, though. do you have a beta?) and a cute plot.
i like how they're five years apart, already left hogwarts, how she's been abroad and ... well, it's different to the usual stuff, you know.
that story made me smile! :) thank you!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad that you enjoyed this.
No I don't have a beta actually. But I should probably get one :P Report Review
I have read this story three times now. And I think I like it more every time! It really is good! It would be awesome if you turned it into a short story!!! I would totally read it!!! Either way I love it! Awesome job!Author's Response: Really? Thank you very much for the review. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story. I had actually planned on turning it in to a short story, I have the next two chapters written - but at that rate it will be a novella, not that I would have a problem with that :P
It's just finding the time to write it. Thank you for the review! Report Review
I really liked this story(: Willis is related to Cormac McLaggen, right? and who's the hot guy on the banner? ;)Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad that you liked the story, and yes, he is the son of Cormac McLaggen. :)
The guys on the banner, the one with dark hair is Gaspard Ulliel and the smaller on, the blonde, is Hayden Christiansen. Report Review
amazing. i absolutley loved it! i just have to point out that james's eyes are hazel (*-*) but you did a great job nevertheless :P
i really liked your way of describing things, places and situations in the story, and your writing really went well and made james and hattie's relationship seem real, etc.
well done! ^^Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I'm so glad that you loved it! Your review has put a smile on my face! :D
Sorry about the eye colour thing, I know that they're hazel :P I just love the idea of them being green, but I know what you mean, I am such a hypocrite cause I get annoyed when other people do it. I should go and hide in a cave. :D
I'm really glad that you enjoyed this! Report Review
I absolutely LOVED this chapter. I love everything about this story. I can't wait to read more. The banner is great, and I love James Potter Fanfictions. I'll probably write one after I'm done with my first story, Midnight affairs. It's great to read this, great inspiration. Keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you liked this story. James Potter is my favourite to write, and to read. :D Report Review
ooh i love it
i've read all your other stories and of course, this is also amazing!
update soon xAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad that you loved this, your review has made my day! I'm so glad that people are still reading this! Report Review
AW!!! SOO CUTEE! I loved it!Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. :P. Report Review
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liked it very much :)Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad that you did. XD Report Review
I love it! I keep reading your writing over and over again and i can't get enough of it. I think you are absolutely amazing and i hope to see more of you in the future :)
200/10Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your review has left a massive smile on my face. I'm so glad that you're enjoying my writing. The fact that you read it over and over again makes me feel so happy. :D Report Review
This was another brilliant story of yours!! I love James!! Really well written as usual :) 10/10 PGAuthor's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. XD Report Review
What can I say? I'm starting to love your stories. All of them. Except, I have one more to read, which I will when I get the time. (: Oh and I couldn't help but notice so far that you write characters like Hattie and Charisma in such an innocent way. Its so much fun to read. (: And I think its adorbale how your uncle and aunt met and how you made that into this cute little one-shot. I also wonder what will happen when Hattie tells Louis it was his cousin. (:
DanaAuthor's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I'm really glad that you loved it - and my other stories. :P
Hattie is rather similar to Charisma I guess, actually, now I think about it, they're incredibly similar. Actually, lets face it, they're the same. XD Report Review
This was amazing. one of the best one-shots I've read on here, I feel sad to think there won't be any more James/Hattie action unless you decide to write a sequel. Anyways, I loved this story and I know a few people who remind me of Willis in the way they act and treat girls so that was kinda fun to see a character who was just like them. I also liked the character of Hattie and would definitely love to see her get her own story if you ever had time and were interested in writing a story for her. I'm also intrigued by how you wanted to put this scene into Under the Bridge but it didn't fit but I'm hoping in that scene you might have Lysander playing the ex-boyfriend and Albus is the one to come to Willa's rescue, yes I know I'm stubborn as a mule but I still want to see Albus and Willa get together to the point that I will talk about them in a review to a story that they aren't even featured in, hahaha. You can go ahead and laugh at me if you want, I already know I'm a dork like that.Author's Response: Dork-ie :P
It's okay. I love their characters too. I am not going to spoil it, telling you how it was going to fit. But I am so desperate to...no, I can't.
Gosh that was hard.
You see, I have update Happy Endings to send the message that I can't post the sequel for a while. I have nine chapters of it and there is 25 in the making. it takes me a long time to write this chapters and it's my GCSE years. I just don't have the time that I used to, until it hits the holidays. But I am writing like crazy. I will have it up eventually!
On to this one-shot. Thank you so much for the review. I am so glad that you liked it, and that you think it's one of the best one-shots on here. I really love the characters of James and Hattie, but I don't know if I wrote any more, it might ruin what people think of them already. You know? But I'm happy to know that you like them that much. XD
Thanks for the review. I will post the sequel in a few months. Happy Easter! Report Review
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