Excellent work! A really great one-shot that is sad, happy, heartbreaking and cute all at the same time. It is written really well, and the reader feels really sorry for Lily but appreciates what she has to do. I'm glad that Snape understood as well, rather than storming off in anger. And a nice James/Lily moment at the end, too. Great writing, well done!Author's Response: So OOPS! I'm really sorry I messed up that last comment I left on your one other review. I got mixed upp. So, I'm gonna say thanks for the other one and I'm glad you like it Report Review
i dont whether it would make a better short story or one-shot.i like it the way it is and we know how it ends up at Godrics Hollow.
but at the same time i'm like, oh, what happens next? is there some kind of shinding with Snivellus, does lily just stick with james?
idk i like it both ways.so...do what you want to!!!
Author's Response: haha thanks. I was just kind of thinking "hhow did Lily stop being so good friends with Snape?" and it kinda fit in with my life when i wrote it haha. thanks for the review tho :) Report Review
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